Abide With Me (Poetry)

in poetry •  7 years ago 

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Abide With Me

Abide with me in spring’s full blush
Twirl in the rain and slop through slush
Feel our hearts pound in joyful rush
Abide with me, in spring’s full blush

Abide with me in summer’s fields
Fierce with heat the hot sun wields
Cool lakes to serve as swelters’ shields
Abide with me, in summer’s fields

Abide with me in autumn’s chill
When nights are cool and all is still
Beside the fire, to touch and thrill
Abide with me, in autumn’s chill

Abide with me in winter’s hush
Lie in my arms, on cushions plush
I’ll kiss your lips so dear and lush
Abide with me, in winter’s hush

Abide with me till we grow old
Rejoice in love never grown cold
In life that’s lived, vows we uphold
Abide with me, till we grow old

And when our time on earth is through
My love will e’er abide with you.

© J C Edwards

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Can i really abide with my love that seems fictional
i tried to activate it's real part but still dumb functional
i gave the originals and she's just been artificial
i really do want a love that will make feel naturalpix.jpg

Wow... this is a lovely poem...

Abide with me when I fall and fail
Stay with me when my heart turns frail
Holding me still when life hurts and bugs
To lace me with caring kisses and hugs

I hope you love my version of your poem... cheers!


@ajremy the teen with steam for steem)

Thank you so much. Your version is lovely too ... I hope it was just an oversight that you didn't upvote mine?

I'm sorry... I guess I forgot.... I've upvoted it now though... it's lovely

Thank you so much; I was sure that was just an oversight. :)

Of course.. you're fantabulous!!