A Pantoum inspired by the Greek Myth, Leda and the Swan
This poem is inspired by Greek mythology in which the god Zeus, in the form of a swan, seduces Leda. According to later Greek mythology, Leda bore Helen and Polydeuces, children of Zeus, while at the same time bearing Castor and Clytemnestra, children of her husband Tyndareus, the King of Sparta. (Source: Wikipedia)
The Pantoum is a form of Classical poetry with repeating lines throughout the poem. It is composed of a series of quatrains; the second and fourth lines of each stanza are repeated as the first and third lines of the next. This pattern continues for any number of stanzas, except for the final stanza, which differs in the repeating pattern. The first and third lines of the last stanza are the second and fourth of the penultimate; the first line of the poem is the last line of the final stanza, and the third line of the first stanza is the second of the final. (Source: Wikipedia)
Seduction
With virile assurance, compelling as Zeus
The thrall of the cygnus o’er his Leda doth loom
Sweet scent of seduction at fair maiden’s blush
The thorn on her rose impales nectarous flesh.
The thrall of the cygnus o’er his Leda doth loom
With arrogant grace lifts his willowy neck
The thorn on her rose impales nectarous flesh
Bends low without censure as it were his due.
With arrogant grace lifts his willowy neck
Cries out his conquest in rich domination
Bends low without censure as it were his due
Preys on her lips and devours her charms.
Cries out his conquest in rich domination
Sweet scent of seduction at fair maiden’s blush
Preys on her lips and devours her charms
With virile assurance, compelling as Zeus.
© J C Edwards
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Oh god that was so deep I don't think i understand half of it. Good job, beautifully written!
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Thank you so much. The poem tells the 'seduction' part of the Greek myth of Leda and the Swan. The Classical poetry format makes it both intricate and challenging - both to write and to read. I appreciate that you read and commented on this.
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No problem kind sir, keep on blowing us away! Shall follow you more of this
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Thank you for your support; it's much appreciated. :)
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I was actually wondering if you'd found this somewhere and were showing us how this type of poetry works.
I'm surprised and yet not surprised to find that it's all your own work.
Astonishing and powerful. Well done!
I've upvoted this by 1% to push the erroneous cheetahbot comment down to the bottom
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Thank you so much ... for everything. I'm pleased to surprise/not surprise you with one of my poems! LOL! This was one of my more challenging ones to write - and it helps to know and understand the Greek mythology behind the work. (This is the kind of thing I do to exercise my brain, lol!)
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Thank you for your comment - please note that I have credited my source as Wikipedia. I looked to confirm that you voted, but you did not.
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Thank you; I will try that next time.
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