The Old Weathered Shack (Poetry)

in poetry •  7 years ago 

The Old Weathered Shack

The old weathered shack
With its chimney of brick
Stands alone in the field
Its frame empty but stoic

Loving hands built it
Those long years ago
With pride and with joy
It watched families grow

The lives that were led
Within rough-hewn walls
Precious memories now
That the house still recalls

Its halls once were filled
With laughter and tears
Dreams that came true
And yes— also the fears

The hustle and bustle
Of warm celebrations
Smells of home cooking
Earth’s bountiful creations

Now the house shivers
In the chill of the night
And waits for the warmth
Of the dawn’s breaking light

It longs for the sounds
Of young children at play
And the heat of the sun
In a full summer’s day

When did it all end
The house wants to know
As it stands all alone—
Where the wild grasses grow

© J C Edwards

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Perhaps it hasn't ended for the old thing and a new beginning is just around the corner, a removal van and screaming kids :0)

You never know, right? I'm sure the old house would love that to happen! Thanks so much for the comment and support. :)

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Thank you!

Lovely poem! I really like the simplicity of the short lines. I've been trying to learn how to be more expressive with fewer words in my poetry. :)

Followed... looking forward to reading more of your stuff. Thanks for sharing .

Thank you so much for your thoughtful response and the follow; both are much appreciated. I'm delighted that you enjoyed this poem, and hope you like the others posted on my blog. I checked you out, thoroughly enjoyed your 'contest' poem, and am now following you as well. Happy 2018!

Lovely, simply lovely!

Thank you so much! xox

Just fantastic! Loved it!

Thank you! :)