Ooohhh I could really picture the scene. This was nicely done. I really like the emphasis on the visuals. It really painted a detailed picture. Takes the reader to a decrepit domicile filled with wonder and history. Or, as others might see it, not a very inviting place to live in. It's all about perspective, and you straddled the line between the two shifting narratives.
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I find old dwellings interesting, as you say history, it's someone's life. To this day I love exploring abandoned buildings, seeing what was left behind. So glad you enjoyed it
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When you say it like that, makes me think of archaeology. In a way, it kind of is, isn't it?
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