RE: Haiku: Heat Wave in South Africa

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Haiku: Heat Wave in South Africa

in poetry •  9 years ago 

And, for fun, to make it a haiku chase...

Woollen cloying haze
how can anybody work
sweating hands tools slip

(I explain a haiku chase in the top of this post: https://steemit.com/haiku/@jenskohler/haiku-chase-based-on-generals-of-napoleon-1-duroc-the-shadow-of-the-emperor-by-herverisson)

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    Sweating hands tools slip
    anxiety consuming
    paralysing fear

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      paralysing fear
      is an impossible task
      rather dance with fear

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        rather dance with fear
        a precipitous knife edge
        amid the thunder

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          amid the thunder
          between lightning's edges keen
          may we step lightly

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            may we step lightly
            into the dawn of the day
            demons undisturbed

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