"Room to Just BE"

in poetry •  7 years ago 

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We cannot know, what storms occur
In the lives of those we meet;
What pains or stresses they carry,
As we see them on the street.
~
Beneath the surface may lie many beautiful secrets;
A love Grows there like a rose;
"Judge not, lest ye be judged",
Is how the saying goes.
~
I say simply Judge Not!, I say
Love beyond appearances,
A love that is free.
Love the un-lovable.
~
Give to each other
That which we need; give the
Love, The Peace,
The Room to Just BE.

The Room to Just BE

by
Jerry E Smith
©4/19/15

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As you can see by the date, this is one of my oldest writings.
It is rather rough in a structural sense, but speaks to me
In a visceral sense nonetheless
JES



These .gifs were created for me by @coquiunlimited; many thanks



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Humm that's great sir. You're making me fall in love with poetry already I will write you my very first poetry sir. You're my mentor.

Thank you @elmanuel. I don't know about the mentor thing. Just write what you feel.

Aiit I will, thanks.