The Moon
(Dianna)
The river, so dark and cool
Holds the secret of my love,
As the River flows,
So, my life, to the end,
And as my life, so my love,
Continuous...
As the moon filters through the leaves,
Dappling the leafy floor,
No one is there to see.
My love falls Blindly on your ears
Surprised, you flee
As a deer in the woods,
Frightened...
I am left alone in the cool,
Damp darkness
By
Jerry E Smith
©7/17/2012
Some back story and explanation.
While I was in the US Air Force, I had
'fallen' for an attractive young lady, who seemed
To like me.
One night, having had a bit too much to drink
I called her and professed my love.
She was (or acted) Surprised, and not too
Gently, set me aside.
She married an acquaintance of mine not
Long after this.
I wrote the poem after the phone call that night.
Her name was
Dianna
Awww, hope writing this helped with the release... Pretty words and befitting images...
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Thank you @ackhoo, it did help, but the event still
Stung for a very long time. Thank you for the
Compliment, I do appreciate it.
I hope you have a splendid
Day.
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Proved you're not frivolous with feelings which is a good thing...
You have a wonderful day too!!
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I can feel the sincerity enclosed within the verses, and the threads of emotions weaved in each line. great job!
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Thank you
@lyxng, I am
Grateful for your
Thoughts and compliment.
What a wonderful way to start
My day
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^___^ my pleasure @jerrytsuseer
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I really amazing time pas from your post.
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Yes @youthhunger, I wrote it a long time ago, I was in pain,
And I needed to let it out
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