There is always emptiness,
Tonight, it is bars of light
On the wall.
I walk alone
Adrift on the wind,
Remembering the touch
Of your hand in mine.
Perhaps it is foolish
To think this way,
To imagine that you
Know how I feel;
Or, perhaps somewhere
You are walking alone...
Watching the moonlight
Paint bars on a wall.
La separación de un ser querido puede ser una de las experiencias más tristes que se puede experimentar, @johngeddes. En la distancia sentimos que nos dividimos en dos, que una parte se muere, deja de ser. Nuestra pregunta, como ser dolido, es si la otra persona sentirá lo mismo, si esa otra parte que se ha ido, sentirá cómo el mundo se ha dividido en dos. Nos consuela imaginar que el sentimiento de pérdida es correspondido, que el mismo caos nos envuelve, que el otro también ha sentido cómo el piso seguro que te sostiene se ha convertido en lodo. Sentido poema en estos últimos días de agosto. Te abrazo
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Este poema se queda conmigo, Nancy - algunos poemas que no recuerdo y otros son tan reales que todavía puedo imaginar las circunstancias - Este es uno de esos :)
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Lovely longing and painted in beautiful imagery.
I'm here thanks to @poeticsnake and being curated with your lovely work as well. Popping in to say hello and meet new Steemians.
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thank you. I appreciate the encouragement.
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This post has received a 9.16 % upvote from @booster thanks to: @johnjgeddes.
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@johnjgeddes........... Beautiful poem.... Keep it up
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Dig it. 😎
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