Painting colours without shadows
Outside the cafe
And nodding,
I too, slip slowly away,
Into a London
Of fog and green grass.
...
Where
Nothing is but
What once was;
In brooding mist,
A glimpse of us—
As Rain threads
Stitch the wound
Still open
From our youth,
And the scent
Of rain
Discloses
Love notes
Fragrant
With your perfume.
A veces la lluvia no ayuda a sedimentar el olvido, @johnjgeddes. Así como en la tierra, cuando llueve empieza a brotar en nosotros los sentimientos, fluyen, se empozan, anegan todo. Nuestros cuerpos, como el patio interior de una casa, se diluyen, se llenan de resonancias. Entonces huele a humedad, a verde, a madera. Entonces aparece el poema que es borde, metáfora del corazón y es recuerdo. Y es porque a veces la lluvia con su olor y presencia abre algunas puertas y ventanas. Bonita noche parati!
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La fragancia es la puerta de entrada a los recuerdos, algunos tristes, otros hermosos
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Beautiful poem, poet! You're always inspired by rain and love.
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Thank you. I am !
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There are times when the rain inspires and other times it saddens, it turns off. Rain is like a muse!
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so true...so true
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Not sure why, but it reminds me of Eden, and love, as it once was.
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yes, the garden is always behind us as the ultimate source of nostalgia
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Really beautiful poem. The progression of thought, emotions and imagery evokes a sense that I'm really there at a cafe, under the backdrop of a rainy day. Simple, yet beautiful.
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thank you! Poetry is not so much the recreation of an experience as the reliving of it :)
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Well put! You're most welcome. Good poetry transcends mere words. Nothing really compares to poetry in terms of the ability to whisk the reader away to a different destination, and to experience the little nuances that the poet weaves intricately throughout the poem. Thanks for constantly putting out beautifully crafted poems.
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