mysterious
As rainfall at night
Secretive
As a dark moon
Recondite
A raven
At twilight
Petals of darkness
Fall
one
by
one
And evening
Tarnishes
Your features
Eyes,
Mouth and hair
Obscured
Adumbrated
With gloom
Words
Opaque
And risque
Brushed
With luster
Of the moon
Lakes and bays
Of solitude
Surround
And remind me
You are darker
Than my moods
I've begun to learn
My heart
Was right—
You're black as hell,
And dark as night.
Poem.? More like a journey to another place.
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ha ha, I'll assume that's good - it's a long way from roses are red:)
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O I love dark imagery. It makes me feel like I have entered into another dimension or the likes of it.
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This is awesome. You are very good @johnjgeddes !
I love your poetry style! Fierce! Resteemed!
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thanks, Leah. You are an encourager :)
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Yes, I am. Keep it up! :)
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motivation mind relaxing poem
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This poet is in love!
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This post has received a 8.95 % upvote from @booster thanks to: @johnjgeddes.
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We want to tell them how much we truly love them, yet often we cannot find the right words. Fortunately, poets and lovers have been trying for centuries to find the perfect words to express the feeling of love. This is awesome. You are very good
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Amazing Poem! Reminds me of you @moonsoleil
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You have a incredible talent. Great poem. Have a good night
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Beautiful poetry We can share our thoughts through poetry.
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If he is black as hell,
And dark as night.....
Why do you lose some energy for him ....
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naice
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This is a nice calm and relaxing poem.
I've begun to learn
My heart
Was right.
Love your writing, happy new year
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Macabre. Cryptic. Beautiful.
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Excellent poetry.My point of view you are a great writer .Keep it up dear.Your photograph is nice.You are looking good.Specially your eyes say some things,Really it is amazing.I am your an ordinary follower.Thanks dear to share your good poem.I read it and like it.Its makes me huge pleasure.
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Wow, really a Nice one
Check mine out
https://steemit.com/poetry/@pope1995/lingering-a-short-tragic-themed-poem-dedicated-to-ladies-who-have-been-through-thick-and-thin-for-love
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In much of deep I heed my dawn,
beautiful!
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Poetry like poetry is supposed to be: intriguing and fascinating.
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With each "pedal of darkness"
that falls
is attached a dream
of what could be
Why we are tempted
by darkness
and hearts of coal
We must taste them
to distinguish reality
from nightmares
Ever so often to
taste life
rather than
to
watch it
from afar
More brilliance and inspiration from the master @johnjgeddes. Thank you fine Sir, once again.
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Haunting and beautiful. Its excellent!
Thank you for sharing!
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caice
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Hi @johnjgeddes,
The way you used metaphors in your poem is really appreciable thing. How beautiful wording you chose
This reminds me a couplet of great URDU poet JAUN ELIA (Translated version)
~ Hence proved peace is rare in universe..
If someone finds it in relationship, then he is not deceived by them yet!
Keep sharing such great posts, Steem On!
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This is everything! well done @johnjgeddes
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Great post there, keep up good work !
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Such an amazing piece @johnjgeddes
I'm new in the community and would love if we get to be friends.
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thank you and welcome, @theophyla - a friend of God is a friend of mine :)
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I am amazed at your poetry is incredible
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