Girlfriend Electric

johnjgeddes (75) in poetry • 7 years ago (edited)

Your ghost

Haunts me

nights;

But your image

Dies

At first light.

I talk

With you

In dreams,

But static

Clouds

What you mean.

This attraction

charged

By sighs and touches

electrifies

The air

About us.

© 2017, John J Geddes. All rights reserved

poetry poem verse love relationships

7 years ago by johnjgeddes (75)

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missiontothemoon (59) · 7 years ago

Powerful... I like this A Lot!

johnjgeddes (75) · 7 years ago

thanks, @misssiontothemoon

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ankitkukreja (33) · 7 years ago

great post upvoted you keep going

booster (68) · 7 years ago

This post has received a 6.82 % upvote from @booster thanks to: @johnjgeddes.

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doryaeriell (2) · 7 years ago

@johnjgeddes Thanks for publishing this Charming instant in time for yourself..

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pjcswart (65) · 7 years ago

Beautiful and dark.

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minnowsupports (28) · 7 years ago

I think this should be continued for about two times longer :) I love it.

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johnjgeddes (75) · 7 years ago

thanks @minnowsupports

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mrblu (62) · 7 years ago

@johnjgeddes nice poem. upvoted

kindly check my poem thanks

https://steemit.com/poetry/@mrblu/poem-could-this-be-love-i-m-feeling-right-now

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johnjgeddes (75) · 7 years ago

thanks

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lukakorba (63) · 7 years ago

The electrification of the air around two lovers due to the charge between them is probably one of the most poetic and beautiful things out there. You managed to express this love, so alive and so real, perfectly! Well done, and thank you for sharing!

PS: If you are interested and have some spare time, I have some poetry on my blog too. :)

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jadae (33) · 7 years ago

I love everything about this, the lines, the colors, the poetry! Get it boo!!!

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johnjgeddes (75) · 7 years ago

thanks for reading @jadae

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aldentan (67) · 7 years ago

I am gathering that it's tough trying to get over the loss of her, be it a breakup or perhaps death itself.

I find poem very poignant. And it's great cause you did it so well with few words.

Thanks @johnjgeddes

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johnjgeddes (75) · 7 years ago

thanks, @aldentan for your thoughtful response

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aldentan (67) · 7 years ago

No worries. Thank you for the art.

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athenabree08 (57) · 7 years ago

Amazing as usual :-) Resteemed.

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johnjgeddes (75) · 7 years ago

thanks, athena

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pjcswart (65) · 7 years ago

i agree.

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louielowa (56) · 7 years ago

Nice!! minimalist poet out there!!

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johnjgeddes (75) · 7 years ago

thank you, @louielowa ...micro poetry is challenging

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louielowa (56) · 7 years ago

i have new poem also mate hope you read this one https://steemit.com/poetry/@louielowa/we

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littlerph (51) · 7 years ago

It's charming and yet sad for some reason. It's very nice @johnjgeddes. :)

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johnjgeddes (75) · 7 years ago

It's the Irish in me I'm afraid - a mist clings to me :)

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leslyfay (55) · 7 years ago

great poem..god job @johnjgeddes ..upvoted this post..

hope you have time to visit my blog and hope you have time to read my poems.. your upvote will highly appreciate..

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johnjgeddes (75) · 7 years ago

Thanks, @leslyfay

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albertjester (64) · 7 years ago

good poem..
regards

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johnjgeddes (75) · 7 years ago

thank you, albert

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karchady (53) · 7 years ago

:O wooooo

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johnjgeddes (75) · 7 years ago

thanks for reading:)

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mers (66) · 7 years ago

Full of sense and meaning in such short phrases.
Keep it up, I' m a fan.

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johnjgeddes (75) · 7 years ago

Thank you so much, @mers. Such a kind comment!

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samer484 (58) · 7 years ago

Niceeee picture and great ur post word
Good luck @johnjgeddes👍👍👍

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johnjgeddes (75) · 7 years ago

thanks, samer

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arbitrarykitten (66) · 7 years ago (edited)

Beautiful word art. Solemn yet sprinkled with a dash of hopeful yearning...

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stillwatersart (57) · 7 years ago

Dreamy words and painting! They go together well. Upvoting and following.

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awgbibb (70) · 7 years ago

Beautifully crafted!

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johnjgeddes (75) · 7 years ago

thanks, @awgbibb