my other life with you

in poetry •  7 years ago 





When you go to sleep, where do you really go?
― Brian Lovestar, Dream Myself Alive



I want to sleep


But don't want to
Put out the candles

Or close the window

To the smell
Of rain...


Just lie

In the lightning's flare

And watch
Streets glow

Where I go
In dreams...


dreaming of you
is so sweet...

who knows?

perhaps this time
We'll meet.


© 2017, John J Geddes. All rights reserved


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What style of poetry is this? I'm having a hard time following it. The content of the poem is sweet but it's hard for me to follow.

nice poem
thank you for sharing

Thank you, @youk95

Love it! Thank you for sharing these beautiful words. upvoted and followed

thank you, @sidewalktraveler - it's not caviar for the general :)

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thank you

That seeet expectation. Reminds me of the time me and Abi were long distance dating, and we prayed to dream of one another each night.

that's beautiful, lydon

Beautiful

thanks Harry

You are welcome

Very nostalgic...

I once had a distant love who dreamed of me regularly, but try though I might I would rarely dream of her... A reality that I found frustrating.

😄😇😄

@creatr

Not bad for a poem. Keep believing, keep moving.

Sweet poem! enjoyed it
Keep up great work :)

thank you

Really getting in to it.