My Promise to You

in poetry •  7 years ago  (edited)



Today is @countrygirl and my wedding anniversary.
This poem is the dedication from the preface
to my first published novel, A Familiar Rain.
Abbey and Alex are the main characters
but are thinly disguised projections of us and our lives

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I write novels
And it’s you, of course—
It always is.


From Alex to Abbey…

You roll your eyes
The same way you did
When I first asked you
To coffee—

The first time we met.

I know I’m a nerd
And you don’t believe
Half what I say…

Neither do I, but
From Alex to Abbey…
That’s huge—

A dedication to you
Of our whole life
From me to you…

And yes, you can roll your eyes,
Like you did
When we first met…

But I really am,
You know,
Dedicated to you...

And whatever
Comes next



© 2017, John J Geddes. All rights reserved



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But I really am,
You know,
Dedicated to you...

And whatever
Comes next

A man of his word; you are a gem my friend. Happy anniversary. :)

thank you, lydon - I appreciate your comment and value your friendship :)

Amazing talent you have and I always love to read it. I wish a happy anniversary and a healthy, funny and long future for you and your better half!🎂

thank you, @emmamia - I appreciate your kind comments and well wishes :)

John, I was wondering the other day if @countrygirl is your wife :) Happy anniversary - I am sending you guys my warmest wishes! 😊

Beautiful poem, by the way.

thanks, Dan - she's my wife and my Muse. I receive those warm wishes and pray you and yours have a blessed peaceful holiday season

My most profound congratulations, you two lovebirds!

I wish you a most happy and memorable anniversary, celebrated today and as often again as possible.

Dear @countrygirl, I'm so glad John found you as his muse...

😄😇😄

@creatr

thanks, my friend - always appreciate your encouragement and friendship :)

Aw. That's sweet @creatr. I have a purpose, see. :)

I just wrote to your wife, I liked the pictures of your marriage very much and I loved her story just like I thought your poem for her was beautiful. I hope you two will be happy for a long long time. I wish you and your family a Merry Christmas and a wonderful New Year.

thank you so much, @clio - such a kind and gracious response - much appreciated!

Aweee! That's so sweet.

thanks, @moniskder

You most welcome dear! I'll resteem your post.

wow nice poem, congratulations

thanks

@johnjgeddes Congratulation to your wedding anniversary, this is a great day for you and @countrygirl, wish you a great and enjoyment day for your both.

thank you

👍🏽👍🏽

Happy Anniversary to @johnjgeddes and @countrygirl. What a sweet romantic thing to feel and write. <3

thank you

You are welcome

Thank you @seareader1. Nice of you to send wishes to us.

Your welcome. It's always great to see such happiness : )

NICE AND POWERFUL POEM SIR......

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You welcome sir

nice poem Keep going

thanks

Awwww so sweet 😍😄 thank you for sharing this with us #steemians and I already enjoy this even more because @countrygirl helped me in some comments making this post that much more sweet. 💖

thanks, @janellelanae :)

I'll be looking for some of your photos!!

Beautiful poem.
Happy anniversary :)
Have a crazy, loving and blasting life.

thank you

Awesome.
Happy couple.
It's so fantastic.

Beautiful! thanks for sharing this.. resteemed!

thanks

Happy anniversary @johnjgeddes. You are awesome!

thank you

Congratulations to the both of you!

thanks, @protegeaa :)

Awesome post I love every post I like

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Happy anniversary! and beautiful poem for me :-)
Have a nice day friend!
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