It pervades.
Invades.
It’s carried on the wind
To the furthest reaches
Of the eaves;
It beads the leaves
And ripples the streets
Makes irises in the pond.
Clothes are damp,
Rooms are chill
A clammy mist hides the hill.
And still I come
Through thunder shocks
On autumn nights
When no one walks,
And still I look
To find your light,
Red and gold
In darkest night.
This is my life lately. You unknowingly write of the woman I love.
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To the extent that the women we love are compassionate and lovely, Jung is correct - all women are the same. But the women we love are also unique which makes our love so precious
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Firstly, I LOVE the picture. It reminds me of a good cry and my mascara smudging the side of my face. (Yes you can use that line).
You rhymed in this one!! Whaaaaat????
I can hear the beating of the rain, the pervasive sound it makes with the words you use. And the silent rescue of the red and gold.
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Hi @countrygirl sounds like you are also an expert poet?
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haha...no, no. I like to understand and observe things. I'm a reader, not a writer. I wish I were one though :)
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What do you like to read?
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You know redheads have both red and gold in their hair, so the window square is symbolic of his Love :)
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I missed the window symbolism but yes, I know about gingers. Hello. :)
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I was just being subtle :)
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you were :) I know. And I was being obvious. And silly.
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I know that :)
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Hahahahahahaha! Yes, truly out of character... but perfectly placed!
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I have a tendency to point out the obvious.....hahahaha.....he's like Matlock and knows the answers to everything!
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It's like raining angels :)
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hehe yeah. These poems are cool. 😀 😃 😄 😁 I hope you have a WONDERFUL day!
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There you go again making me highly high on choice of words.
My god of Poetry!
It was a darling view to imagine red and gold light in darkest night! Such beauty!
Did you close your eyes to imagine it while writing?
I am thirsty for more. . . .
@johnjgeddes
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thanks @mimy - I suppose visual imagery comes easiest to me. Yes, I'm always picturing what I write and am even narrating inside my head everything I do throughout the day - it's like a radio announcer commenting in the background and I wasn't even aware that I did that until I caught myself narrating dialogue one morning while shaving LOL!!
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You got my vote and a resteem :)
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thank you, @ipkiss
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I like :-) Such a heart warmer
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thanks, robyn :)
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Good one, i'm looking for more :)
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thanks, @farseer
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yw
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Beautiful. 😀 😃 😄 😁 I hope you have a WONDERFUL day!
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This post has received a 17.35 % upvote from @booster thanks to: @johnjgeddes.
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nice colors :) waiting to see more ..upvoted and follow
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thanks
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Loved this!
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thanks, @writerbro
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Magic! I just saw the rain you described!)
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thanks, @anforo :)
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I absolutely love the imagery throughout this piece, especially "Makes irises in the pond." Beautiful. :)
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thanks Tina - Do you realize you are the only one who noticed that small image?
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It particularly struck me, both as an allusion to eyes and as what the rain nurtures in forthcoming blooms... I love this piece.
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thanks, Tina - I appreciate that
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love your poem they are simply beautiful,
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thank you, @joendegz!
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Delightful.
😄😇😄
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thanks :)
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Beautiful Words, you always seem to immerse yourself ( or your characters) in rain.
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