Reflected in a mirror—
Peaceful
No longer striving,
No signs of strain…
The kind of face
A boy would choose
For when he became a man
I thought of the portrait
Of my uncle
Dead before I knew him
And somehow
I grew up
To become him
My mother told me
Before he died
He held me and wept
I often wondered
What secrets he kept
Did he see
I’d be
Just like him?
This man in the portrait
Staring into
A dark future…
What did he see
That made him weep?
Did he see
The little I’d become
A failed man,
A disappointment?
Or did he think
I was the hope
Of life to be
Small child
In his arms…
Not yet talking
But encumbered with mystery?
That's heartbreaking. I don't believe for one second he's disappointed in you. You still are encumbered with mystery. (Col. 1:27)
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thanks - I hope so
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I strongly identify with that man. I am that man.
That man is Simeon, holding the Christ Child, weeping with thanksgiving to God for the incredible gift of the child in his arms. A child, so long promised, now at last seen, now finally here.
Beautiful work, John. Thank you.
😄😇😄
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I didn't think of that Biblical allusion, perhaps, because of the autobiographical dimension
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Great work John, I sometimes have the same feeling on whether little kids have these thoughts, where they ponder about what lays ahead and who they would like to be. I wonder...
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I think it depends on the sensitivity of the child
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very true indeed, I wonder if I was that child.
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I tried to see, if this was ironic, but it wasn't it later became emotional, then beautiful, i think this one is a simple languages poem almost a free verse. Good work John
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thank you, Jose ...yes, mostly free verse
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Deep stuff John, remember, failure belongs only to ego, hope belongs to one in motion. Best.
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thanks, Doug
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I know this kind of feelings, maybe it´s necessary to grew up to see reflection of oneself in a child. And a child must have a very big sensibility and he must feel a very big admiration to identify himself with a mature person (Please, excuse me my possible English mistakes)
Have a nice day
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thanks, @mllg - sometimes sensitive children feel responsible for pleasing adults
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Thanks for your comment
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Back from vacation (Where internet just worked on midnight, if ever) and i find this amazing piece.
Man, today is going to be a good day.
Thank you for sharing!
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thanks, @flashfiction - appreciate that
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Posts that attract friends ...
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thanks
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you're welcome.
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Same same friend, I also have a new friend post when there is time to visit my block ..
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good to read this poem
wonderful job
i like it dear
keep it up
@johnjgeddes
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what a beautuful poem you must be a great writter
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thank you
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This is a sad one, but I am sure your Uncle would have been proud of the man you had become!
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Amazing poerty..
Thanks for sharing it
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thanks
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very nice poetry.
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thanks
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Beautiful... I too write poems but in hindi.. This poem has touched my heart
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