Are watching the Moon tonight.
Just above the bourne
It rises huge and white.
Like a face in a globe
Bloated and distorted,
Resting just above the horizon
On the road before us.
It’s a genial, happy face…
A little pale, a bit grim.
But as we get in the car and head towards it;
It opens its mouth and yawns
And we drive in.
My last thought as it swallows:
“I won’t do that again.”
I want to do a major literary analysis of this poem. I would likely post it this week on steemit.
Am I permitted to?
@johnjgeddes
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Yes, of course, @mimy . Let me know when you post it :)
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Okay, I will. Thank you!
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Was that pic the inspiration for this?
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No, actually finding the pic was torturous and took me to the bane of all who search for a photo - the Pinterest website
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Upvoted for use of the word bane.
I too am bane for searching for photos, you don't think all those neked wimim are mine?
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wow! its artistically so impressive,your words that accompany it are so sweet and l have really liked them.@johngeddes thank your very much for taking your time so as to come up with this lovely poetry
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thanks, @mutamaiks
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Not me. I am watching steemit to see if anything is cool on the posts. This one was. =D
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thanks, @braxton101
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I was honestly confused at the ending. It seems rather dark, like filled with regret. Am I right to say that?
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yes, definitely. Despite the superficial levity it is grim humour
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My first thought: A murderer who just dumped a body.
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The ending made me smile.
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I'm glad, @somena
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Love the surprise ending!
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thank you!
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Wow. This is brilliant. And yes the ending was just crazy. Great job.
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thank you
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thanks, @ ihuomastephen
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What a brilliant ending! I bow to your genius :)
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you are too kind. Thanks @girlwithoutwings
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Now that's what you call cool. Unexpected ending tho. :) Loved it. ^^ desu~
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Thanks, @littlerph - sometimes the Moon seems close enough to touch :)
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Yeah, true... :)) You're welcome @johnjgeddes. ^^ desu~
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I like it thanks. That image looks like the CEO of Goldman Sachs. 😀 😃 😄 😁 😆 I hope you have a WONDERFUL weekend!
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ha ha, thanks, @pjcswart
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😀 😃 😄 😁 I hope you have a fun day!
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Good ending. Upvoted
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