Storms—Both human and Natural

in poetry •  7 years ago 



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They come from nowhere,
Starting out as rain
And then they change…


I find it strange
The way things suddenly
Become frigid.

It’s early spring
Barely mid-April
And I can’t complain

But perhaps
It’s something more
Than temperature.

Weather and moods
And the pathetic fallacy
That one causes the other;

I know it isn’t true,
Like physiognomy,
Yet I trust it.

Sudden events
Whether moods
Or human temperaments

Four seasons,
Four humors,
Four elements...

We’re made up
Of various degrees
Of the same things,

But with the weather
You can wait—
It’s different dealing
With a state.

Whether in the mind,
The will or soul
Life erodes

Some things get old
While other things
Explode.

Which brings me back
To primeval elements
And unaccommodated man—

Like Lear abandoned
On the heath
Fending off lightning
With his fists

Outside of human shelter
In the thunder’s pudder
We find a cave and make a fire

We knap flint
To make a knife
And try to deal
With ice storms
In our lives.



© 2018, John J Geddes. All rights reserved



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I like your poem though I am finding what is really means. Poems give out different meaning to the reader.
Will you kindly tell me what brings this out?
Thanks.

Thanks, seyiodus - the reason for the ambiguity is that writers use symbolism which is a shorthand summary of the theme- in this poem ice storms refer to the naturally occurring storm and the storm of human emotions

hmm, I guess as much. Thanks for explaining.

Another fine poem, John. I, too, am ambivalent about moods & physiognomy & such... And, yet, we are susceptible, the inner to the outer.

To people who do not believe in astrology (which I only believe in partly) I say: but look at the influence of the moon on the ocean and we, too, are afterall contained bodies of water...

Back to your poem, nice cross-cross work you do, going back & forth to inscrutable states within/ without & their invisible/indivisible link.

thank you, @yahialababidi - Yes, we are inextricably tied to our environment and our metaphors for moods are drawn from the elements - I agree we carry a world within to the world without, hence the criss-crossing back & forth

Estoy de acuerdo con cada uno de los versos de este poema, mi muy estimado @johngedes. Así como la naturaleza crea huracanes, inviernos, tormentas, primaveras; así también el hombre. Las palabras y las acciones son capaces de sembrar fenómenos que a veces somos incapaces de controlar. Una palabra no dicha en su momento, una mirada, puede crear grandes grietas, abismos que somos incapaces de cruzar. Para las tormentas naturales habrá una casa donde guarecerse, pero ante las humanas, ¿cuál espacio sirve de refugio, cuales brazos te sirven de cobijo, cuál mirada te sirve de amparo? Quedamos a la intemperie con el corazón expuesto. Hagamos entonces de la palabra una puerta, un puente, una casa. Te abrazo siempre.

Tienes razón Nancy - no hay refugio de las tormentas humanas, excepto en los brazos de otro. Como siempre, una respuesta reflexiva

Here in Ottawa I did not knap a flint but I did take a nice long nap. Freezing rain all day. The Power is soon to go out. I will stay in bed tomorrow.

ha ha, sounds like a plan :)

Kids are out skating on the driveway... the air is so crisp. The trees are crackling under the wait of 2” of ice. I hope we make it through the ni

storm are mate matching

This poem speaks to my soul tonight. I've been feeling the frigid-ness, while it is a lovely 70 degrees outside.

It can be summer outside and winter within...I know

I like your poetry I could really find the meaning. Poetry is paid to the reader.
Would you please tell me how it will be done?

symbolism is a shorthand summary of the theme- in this poem ice storms refer to the naturally occurring storm and the storm of human emotions

They say the flap of a butterfly's wing can affect the weather on the other side of the world and so why not your mood. How ... is the question. Quite enjoyed this philosophical write, John:)

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  ·  7 years ago (edited)

Moods can just confirm how complex man can be switching between all forms seamlessly as night dawns to day and day dusks to night.
Cheers
My upvote is worth close to nothing, so I would rather resteem this beautiful piece great job @johnjegeddes

Thank you, but you must always vote - good things come from it ex nihilo, nihil fit

👍👍👍.........done

Poetry is not needed to write or write beautiful poetry. Your mind is wonderful, the lines of your poetry are alive. I became a fan of your poetry.