And forced ourselves
To move about
In the cold room...
The sheets still warm
From our love-making.
Afterwards,
When the lamps were on
And I was staring at your beauty,
Watching you combing out
Your long hair,
I looked out the window to see
Another enchanting tableau—
A gray world still asleep
In the sudden early snow.
Cuántas veces ha pasado que deseamos continuar en la cama, arropados por el ser amado, alargando la unión, el encuentro!! Me gusta la mirada que hay en este poema del adentro y el afuera: adentro hace calor, afuera frío! La mirada hacia afuera no solo habla de la belleza del paisaje sino también de la imposibilidad de salir de aquella habitación, del nido que es la cama. La naturaleza aveces juega a favor de los amantes!! Bonita noche, @johnjgeddes.
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Tan cierto, Nancy - El deseo es un fuego y, sorprendentemente, también lo es la belleza de una nevada temprana que arde con una miríada de diamantes que se queman al tacto :)
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Love my bed...with my love, jejeje. Beautiful poem and pic!
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thanks for your response
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Beautiful poem ... I can feel the snow is coming.
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Thank you - yes, it is - it's 50 F here right now - won't be long :)
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Wow superb lines , beautiful poetry...we can feel ,what you are trying to convey through your poetry..
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thank you!
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This is so lovely
I can feel the message
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I can almost feel and see the scenery with your words. This is beautiful. 😍
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You perfectly capture that magical moment with a lover early in the morning!
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