Waves of the Celestial Sea

in poetry •  7 years ago  (edited)



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Over the roof
Goes the Moon
And takes a beach
Of clouds with it


I can’t navigate
Cloudy ways
Shifting continents
Or starry bays

All I know
Is the night is bright
As a summer’s day
By the sea

And waves of clouds
Break
Over the house…
Submerging everything.



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Your poetry is a pleasure to read aloud. Thank you again. :)

that is such a nice compliment - thank you, Linny

I dont know why but while reading the peom, i felt i am in middle of summer... Nice one by the way :)

thank you, @farseer

Wonderful ... it really takes you someplace nice:)

I'm glad, Pryde :)

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Nice post with beautiful diction
As a comment i writ a poem to to reciprocate you..

beauty of full moon is fatamorgana
when you see an angel sit on it
you never know how she is look like
if you look at all night
you'll find
full moon will disappear behind horizon
leaving tinge of pale shine
you just see the dark below

you must face reality
your feet on the earth
use your mind to guide your steps

navigate your canoe
make journey to the ocean
with cluster of the star to guide direction
to reach certain port

waram regard from Central java - indonesia

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Hi @johnjgeddes. I'm from Venezuela. I liked the poem. Your poetry has moved me. Regards.