Momentum of our sunsteemCreated with Sketch.

in poetry •  6 years ago  (edited)

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Cooling down and changing the colour of my face
In the moment for a second and then loosing it's grace,
Pouring my sweat, and not for long last
Heavy to carry my breath short so I breath fast,
First I saw the stars and now I am one
Bright as the light that comes from our sun,
Carrying force inside of my life that always brings me up
Why do you go, and where do you end up?
Left for now to be alone, and speaking doesn't complete this null
Controlled by the thought of the sun or is it something more powerful


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Original poem by @jokeskay
Inspired by 100 days of poetry contest created by this discord server.

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      ·  6 years ago (edited)

    I love the image it creates in the mind
    Keep writing, @jokeskay

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        ·  6 years ago 

      thank you man, I will follow you and i appreciate the comment :)

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