this is a poem by Samael Talmudic,who had captured the perfect essence of love.
for those readers who love poetry as much as I do I bring u another great writer who has form greatness with hid wordplay.
Threw my heart to the wind and the sun soaked me
The pen passed a dream down a hallway
by chance
inspiring a write that was written with a vigor
autumn leaves passed as the mail man
noticed
but unnoticed
connecting the dots from hearts to lips of a lover
cursive caught me off guard
threw me into the metal rail
leaps and bounds
leaving my folder on top of my car
i drove off
a wind witch threw my words as rain
and you
the sun
came and helped me pick them up
i gave you a hug
my chest fell a thousand times past my feet
in a beat
past sidewalks grey concrete
fingertips digging in your back
i crumbled as your cookie
and forgot how long forever was in your eyes
Poem is writing by samael talmudic.
Nice work by Samael Talmudic!
@joseph, check out a poem writen by me. https://steemit.com/poetry/@joebest/e-x-i-t
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Wow this is awesome nice post friend, you can check out my post I was writing a story check it out you may like it @joseph
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thanks ^^
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Verry good post my friend
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Well a lot of imageries, there seem to be a calmness about the poem, but the descriptive abilities of the poet is what makes this sweet
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You can find more of his work here : https://zaroffpoetry.wordpress.com/about/
He writes under a few different names, just giving the author of the poet some props because he's pretty talented.
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poets/samael/
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@joseph you really have such great poetry making skills..... Big thumbs up for this!!
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..."You never can tell what your thoughts will do,
In bringing you hate or love;
For thoughts are things, and their airy wings
Are swifter than carrier doves.
They follow the law of the universe –
Each thing must create its kind,
And they speed o’er the track to bring you back
Whatever went out from your mind."
Taken from "You Never Can Tell" - Poem by Ella Wheeler Wilcox
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You can really feel the passion of love in this one!
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Magic of the words!!!! I am witnessing it here
-cheers-
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Where dId you find samael works?
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All I want of this post is that this is so warm yet so calm and sweet at the same time! Nice poem:)
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"The only truth is unconditional love. Everything else is an illusion." These words in this poem helps to reinforce this maxim.
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Nice poem @joseph.
You guys can check out my poems on @Vbedewrites.
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Nice interplay of words coupled with a sublime feel and tempo.
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nice!
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My mouth is still opened in amazement and face filled with smile... I love your meticulous way of writing, this is my type of post.. I'm following you right away to improve myself... So much word play and rhymes at the same time.
@joseph, kindly check my blog and resteem my post for your suggested corrections.
Thanks in anticipation
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