A Poem About Time Traveling

in poetry •  7 years ago 

I wish there were a way for me to form words to even begin to tell you how beautiful this poem is. But I believe my words wouldn't do it any justice.

The beautiful thing about reading is the ability to travel time within that book, poem, biography, etc. etc...

With so much going on in the world it is always my way of vanishing for a brief moment. To escape the ugly and the evil in today's time.

The poem is titled Time Travel and it was written by Olivia-H (MX Ink). I loved every bit of it.

I hope you all enjoy it as much as I did.

TIME TRAVEL

I wish, I could time travel to 40s.
When,
Imagination used to be colourful
Songs, filled with presence
Ponds, serene deep
And,
The sky, clear blue.

I wish, I could time travel to 40s.
To witness, How,
The Humans were made Guinea pigs
WHO started to crawl
Penicillin promised its magic.

I wish, I could time travel to 40s.
When,
Mustache use to rule this world
Charlie was my smile Icon
Hitler has nonsense to tell
And,
Albert was lamenting.

I wish back, days of 1940s.
When,
Trust has everything to do.

Written by Olivia-H (MX Ink)

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Nice Poem, If I could time travel I would ask my younger self to buy some bitcoins!!!!, but I wouldn't travel 1940's i'd rather travel to 1960's, there was less war comparatively, less disease, still clear blue skies, a lot of wilderness and lot less stress.

You can travel to any place that you want in your heart.

Nice poem @joseph.

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As if I had traveled to 1940s...

Pretty cool. Poetry does allow us to paint our own picture in the back of our minds.

I <3 it. :) I like to write a time travelling poem too. Your piece inspired me. :)

Pretty cool.

Canciones coloridas inspiran este bello poema, quisiera vivir en los 40 y usar esos bellos atuendos donde había interés en la belleza del corazón, dónde conquistaban con canciones que nos tocaban el los sentimientos mas puros y sinceros.

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i wish i could travel to the 40s
when the cost of living was not as high as it is now
when the Average Cost of new house was $3,900
when the Average wages per year was $1,700
when the Cost of a gallon of Gas was 10 cents
when the Average Cost for house rent was $30 per month
I wish i could travel to the 40s, when life was easier

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I don't know about the 40's. Now the Renaissance is a time I'd like to visit for maybe a week haha.

Beautiful

It would be awesome to time travel to different eras. This would give us such amazing perspective on our lives!

I wish everyone can travel to 1940s so we can see the horrible events of the War and would do anything to keep it from happening again.

Thanks for sharing this beautiful idea with us
-cheers-

A great thought indeed :) I like to believe that we can travel in time when we look back at our past, that what we learn there can allow us to change the present and in turn alter our future...

I also love poetry

i wish i was to 40's
i would wait for my grandma to give birth
to my mother
then i would treasure every moment of her short lived life

hermoso poema. te invito a leer los poemas publicados en mi bolg. espero te gusten.

This is not just a poem...all what was said is the truth.at that time life was kind of more meaningful,more than it is now... I love the last stanza "I wish back, days of 1940s.
When,
Trust has everything to do."" these sentence strikes me...at that time...trust is valued. Unlike it is now

So inspiring, travelling in time

If i could time travel,
I would.
Doing it will make
Me marvel
Not only will i rebuke my younger self
I wiill smash his head on a marble.

I really like it, i would also like to travel bakc in time, when it was about trust and not only about money, like it is today...People used to care about each other and we also used to talk to one another and comunicate, instead of staring in front of a television or of a smartphone.

Me siento identificado con lo que quieres decir a través de tu poema, tus palabras me llevan a otros tiempos en los que realmente también me gustaría vivir y viajar, como tú bien lo dices. Es un bello poema. I really liked it. A mí tu poema me hace igualmente reflexionar acerca de mi pasado, el de mis padres y abuelos. Mucho éxito.

I love it!!!congratulation !!!

I love to travel, with my fingerprints or without them