The style, and rhythm in her poetry is quite beautiful...
Her name is LunasChild8, and she is a new member to the website filled with brilliant poets. I have read many poems on the deepundergroundpoetry site, and I was pleased when I realized that the people who follow others or just happen to stop by for a good read never actually leave negative comments, but rather, words of encouragement and praise.
A community where feelings and thoughts are taken seriously and with open arms, but more importantly, with an open mind.
I have expressed numerous times my love for poetry, and love for wordsmiths. I am envious of their talents, but am extremely happy to read them, and somehow visualize the picture they are painting.
The poem down below was written and published by LunasChild8, and I hope to see more work from her, and will share all the great poems I come across with you folks. The steemit community...
I hope you all enjoy the good read as much as I did.
Poem by LunasChild8
Heart of Fire
Here we are lost in space,
Trying in vain to find our place;
The endless void is creeping in,
Will someone save us from our sin?
Suddenly the sky goes bright,
Glimmering with a thousand light;
Shoving the void with mighty ire
Igniting within our heart of fire.
Oh Shaman, holiest of all,
Heed our prayers, hear our call;
Protect the chosen on their voyage,
Fill their hearts and souls with courage.
With every dawn comes a new day,
Another reminder that we are safe;
Your being is pure, precious like sapphire,
May the sparks feed your heart of fire.
That's a beautiful poem that you shared. And yes, I agree the visual imagery that poems paint is extremely important and for me this poem paints some exceptional imagery. It also triggers a lot of emotion.
I followed you and started checking out your other posts. You've got some good content, Joseph! Keep up the good work! You're making steemit a great place.
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excellent post, poems that you like when you start reading them, I hope your next publications.
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Meaningful and creative, much love and appreciation :)
Stay passionate, stay blessed !
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deep and soul ful, love it this is beautiful and flawless
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She writes beautiful poems and needs to be recognized, thank you for sharing the work and bringing awareness to those who need it.
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Howe nice poem. Love it.. Love.. love..
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I agree with what you have said.She is a great poet.No doubt of it.I love the every single word of it.And I think it is nicely explain the situation now Im going through.Please share more work of her with us.
"May the sparks feed your heart of fire"
-Cheers-
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correct. we enjoy between each phrase and space
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Nice poem! I liked it
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beautiful content!
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This one really speaks to me, we're all out here trying to figure life out, sometimes we fall off track and feel hopeless, and sometimes we are blessed with moments of clarity to help guide us back to ourselves, we find our place within and we can never be marred at our core.
Beautiful poem, thank you for sharing.
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Thanks for the contribution, this kind of contributions allow us to know a little bit about new artists and in that way learn a little more of each style, keep it that way
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its a beautiful piece... beautiful nd easy to flow with i love ur rhythmic flow
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Beautifully expressed. Here you find courage, hope, how blessed we are almighty is our constant companion not let us down. No matter dark it gets. As rightly said every dawn comes with day
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Great Piece!, ive always being in love with rhymes, but the way she smoothly connects her lines is commendable, a message is not so complicated to fathom, thanks for sharing this
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You are exectly right the style and rythem is great nuce post
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good post your
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"Poetic Justice" I like that :) It's very poetic.
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This is superb
Nice choice of words
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wow wow wow that's a really beautiful poem. thank you.
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@originalworks
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Love it man! Very well written. I believe we are on much of the same thing. And on the same page. I got a lot of goodness coming out as well, if you'd like to have a read :)
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I really like it. I write too and the way we play on words are kind of the same. its a good one though.
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是火之心，还是心之火？
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This is a really nice one.
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beautiful poem, ima poet from the uk just signed up today looking forward to being in touch with more poetic minds
MAY OUR SPELLS SAVE THE WORLD LOOL
FREEDOM TO MANKIND X
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Beautifully said, every word felt as if they were chiseled in stone. I’m a poet myself and reading this brighten my day. Thank you
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it's a lovely poem, so full of feeling. great work!
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great stuff brother.this poem made my day <3
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I want to trick and tips about poetry
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Thank you Joseph. Lunas Child8 has written a poem that takes me into space and back to Earth in a lovely chase.
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