RE: Laughing-stock

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Laughing-stock

in poetry •  7 years ago 

I really like the way you made "leaves" and "streets" rhyme. Not sure if you meant to do that.

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Thanks, @killerflu. I use proximate or near rhyme sparingly but continually throughout my poems and even my stories. It sets up an inward music in the hearer's mind...or so I hope :)