RE: reflections on chasing a bum from my backyard with a baseball bat at 530 a.m.

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reflections on chasing a bum from my backyard with a baseball bat at 530 a.m.

in poetry •  7 years ago 

There's some wonderful images in the piece - "birds and their songs, sharp like needles", and "foreplay-dawn" stick out to me. You have a very playful sense of language, sorely missing from a lot of the other stuff I've read on here. Looking forward to more great content!

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      ·  7 years ago 

    Thanks bruv! More to come!

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