That sky, it's downtown, so bright, so hot, so sharp.
Within, cool as a cathedral
A place of worship
All that goes on inside and out reminds you
Of life and how it works
The conscious and the unconscious,
Arrivals and Departures
Year after year.
Tar pits, Chumash, Tongva
Portuguese, Spaniards,
Coming, staying, leaving.
Nice one.
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Vivid, vibrant, pulsating, kind of. If poems have muscles, this one is certainly well equipped. Check my poems too :) .
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Oh not so long. Wish i could read more. Nice work @lloyddavis. You are the kinda guys i learn from. Stay awesome
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