By the time the sun arose
tipped treetops, city buildings, mountains
and me,
everything had changed
and so
I go on. 
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Sometimes, it's the shortest poems that are the most profound. It definitely intrigued me enough to where I wanted to reread it a few times. I also loved your use of syntax. Well done mate, I dig this.
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Thank you. I appreciate your comments. Glad that you enjoyed it.
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Nice one. We all have to go on. Otherwise it is Game Over. Thanks for sharing this nice piece. God Bless. Welcome to the Steemit Community. Search for the MSP Community Project to ease in your entering Steemit.
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also you can call a bot to make your stuff original and give you 0.02 cents... just reply in your post with @originalworks cya hope I have been helpful .
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