RE: Poem - Pup

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Poem - Pup

in poetry •  8 years ago 

Great piece of writing! The flow really suits the type of poem, and the different aspects of love explored in each stanza really work well together! The photo you used also works well, especially with the first stanza. The lines 'I love the way you look at me//With your beautiful brown eyes' set a scene and a certain type of poetic mood right off the bat. Well done, and thank you for sharing!

PS: If you are interested and have some spare time, I have some poetry on my blog too. :)

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Thanks! I've actually been reading your blog for a while hahah big fan.

Thank you! :) hehe