Very nice poem! The alternating short & long lines create a perfect tempo. The key is to acquire the skill of patience, yet knowing how to spend your time productively. Well done, and thank you for sharing!
PS: If you are interested and have some spare time, I have some poetry on my blog too. :)
Thank you so much @lukakorba <3 ;)
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