Very nice flow and rhyme scheme. As for the poem, I loved the fact that each stanza alone is a little poem onto itself. They all express different stages and aspects of the journey we call life, and when fitted together, they paint a beautiful picture of life in its totality. Thank you for sharing!
PS: If you are interested and have some spare time, I have some poetry on my blog too.
Thank you for reading my poem and for the kind comments. I love reading and writing poetry so I definitely will check your poems
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You are welcome! Same here, poetry, both writing and reading it teleports me to another realm. Thanks!
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