I'd rather... (An Original Poetry)

in poetry •  7 years ago  (edited)

Good day everyone! I'm feeling a lot better now. 😁 Here's a little poetry I made today, or a verse -- I don't really know. 😂😂😂 But, yeah, I hope you're going to like it.



ENJOY! ❤😘




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i'd rather sit

here in the dark

and let whiskey

burn my throat --

than lay awake

in an empty bed

that used to be

our home.




Thank you for reading! ❤






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      ·  7 years ago 

    I love your pic! nice!

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      ·  7 years ago 

    Roses are red and violets are blue, I read your poem and I was like 'Damn', I write a blog but never gets steem, then I though its because of curl but then I realize you get because you are a girl :P :D :)

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      ·  7 years ago 

    ha ha ha that's a good one. But I can see you're a newbie. It's only normal that your posts are not so exposed yet. But soon, your posts will earn some as well. Just be patient! ❤😁

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        ·  7 years ago 

      Yes.. Its patience.. Im still even waiting for my time.

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        ·  7 years ago 

      Don't worry my dear, you're doing totally fine. 😉

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          ·  7 years ago 

        Thks ma'am😄

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          ·  7 years ago 

        @lyxng , oh I see, thank you up voting my comment, it made me earn 4 cents yaay :D, #following

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          ·  7 years ago 

        Followed you as well. Steem on, my friend.

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            ·  7 years ago 

          Nice lines my dear @lyxng, I just put up another one, check it out. Tell me how u see it. You know you are my mentor in poetry.

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            ·  7 years ago 

          You flatter me as always. Of course I'd love to check it out. 😀

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              ·  7 years ago 

            You are so lovely

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