The notepad surrounds at me, stares me with its white face, waiting for the words.
I stop for a moment, and back again, listening the sound of carnival, everybody surrounds me and pushes.
At this point i'm sure
I hate humans, i'd rather be a monkey.
Without religion, without politics, without state, without facebook, without all that humans have.
It's a lie,
I have facebook.
Now the notepad has a few words, but it's still incomplete, the wordless white bothers me.
So i open the Paint and fill it in black
I feel good now
08/02/2018, macaco
I like the subtle ending for this poem. I was a bit taken back it happily surprised. Good work.
By the way, it looks like you may need some editing for better English. I'd be happy to do it for you if you would like.
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I'm glad you liked
I really need help with the english, and i'll love if you help me.
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I tried not to alter your words too much. And it's really no problem.
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Obrigado pela sua ajuda!
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De nada. Portugues?
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Brasileiro
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I thought so. I have no clue about Portugese, but I speak a little bit of Spanish.
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