space and time
here and now
dance around in a circle
joined in the center
coexisting somehow
than we imagine
big and small
living independently
yet
still joined
from one another
together
but separate
perceptibly different
extremely distinct
what we know
living in the past
creating the future
disconnected
from the mind
its nature
the inherently unknown
grasping at straws
stumbling
in the dark
these precious two
ceasing
to be
at this very moment
nothingness lives
us all
beyond what we
know
the paradox
of life
all around us
the space inside
big
or small
is yours forever.
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I like the rhythm.. sometimes I write something and the rhythm grabs me like yours does. well done upvoted
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Thanks @rebeccabe... I love to feel the rhythm, it helps me connect to the piece. Cheers!
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Oh this touched me....together, but apart. So different but the same...
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...all one!
Thanks for the thoughtful comment @giantbear
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I love to read poetry. I always love poetry searching poetry Finding poetry I found your poetry Poetry I was so surprised that I wrote a very beautiful poem that you liked me very much Thank you so much for giving us such a beautiful poem to share with us, so that we can learn something Maybe he gave you a poem by thinking, for him
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Thanks for the comment @mahisamim
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beautiful!!!
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Thanks you!
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lets go beyond infinity !!
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LETS GO!!!
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Damn @macksby First that Image caught me but those wordzzzz touched me deeply.
I’m feeling so disconnected from that whole wacked out planet. Turning in some kind of hermit state of mind but craving connection. The more I wish for, the more I am drifting away
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I love to hear from you!!!
You have no idea.., how good it makes feel when you say -- "those wordzzzz touched me deeply" (actually you probably do).
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Your creativity is infinite, one of the best poetry I've read in the past couple of years
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You should read the other poems. Absolutely beautiful!
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I read
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Thanks @dobartim.., that is one heck of a compliment -- much appreciated!
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It's not easy to write excellent poetry
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