moonlight filters in
through cherry trees
over a locked trunk
onto the plank floor
pushing toward me
I lie on silk cushions
in a room without fire
it finds my toes first
All pieces are newly crafted and posted shortly after in adherence to the rules of the challenge. All the photos are mine unless otherwise stated.
Entry for Day 84 of 100 Days of Poetry Challenge by @d-pend.
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hide and seek with the moon:D
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:)
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What season is it? The fire being unlit May or May not be necessary. (Silly autocorrect capitalization).
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I'm leaving that up to the you and your experience of the piece. For me, there is something to be said about contrast and mood as fire is such a potent symbol. ;)
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I liked this poem. Almost like a song
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Thank you, dear. :)
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whether this short poem is your work @mamadini, you have a talent for this field, success is always for you.
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Thank you -- this is indeed my work. I wrote it today. :P
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thanks back for you @mamadini.
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