“You took that turn again!”
The ocean vast and dark – swells cold and pulls.
“It only hurts at first and then I’m in your lungs aquatic.”
Salty undertaker.
Lurching sting.
“Remember how long I kept you last,
how you swayed like the great sea grass?
"Remember the time of saline tears
and how my expanse swallowed them gone?”
Sink.
Sunk.
Intriguing. Spooky.
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Thank you kindly, @coldsteem.
I love spooky, in an intriguing way. ;)
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This brought my senses to full attention! Splendid write! <3
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<3 Thank you, Tina. I really like playing dialog through a poetic filter.
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Awesome work, I love the darkness of it.
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Thank you kindly.
I was in a rather strange mood, a place I like to write from. :)
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I felt that in a deep place in my heart, gorgeous poem. Thank you for sharing. I hope you are inspired to write many more for us to read.
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@lifemovedbysteem, what a wonderful thing to say -- truly, thank you. <3
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