into the ocean
until my feet
no longer touched
and I went under
until I could not breathe
I heard your voice
and followed
until I could go no further
on my back
until the sun broke
the horizon in an unhurried
decent
until (99)
into the ocean
until my feet
no longer touched
and I went under
until I could not breathe
I heard your voice
and followed
until I could go no further
on my back
until the sun broke
the horizon in an unhurried
decent
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<3 <3 <3
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Makes me think of those Sirens of Greek mythology, luring the adventurer away from safety. Sounds like you've been stranded in the nether zone between the two ;) Such tender phrasing, and with a great tranquility in that last stanza, almost like a sigh. Congrats on the MSP selection - it's very much deserved!
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Thank you for the Congrats and lovely words. <3
I was feeling some of that Undine energy when I wrote this -- how treacherous seemingly sweet things can be. ;)
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Another great poem of imagery. You are definitely a talented writer @mamadini!
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Thank you, T. :)
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Suffocating one, my friend ;) . Until breath is taken, at least.
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Thank you, dear. The images surfaced from a dream as I rose this morning.
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Welcome. You know, Polish literary critic Henryk Bereza was known for his keeping a kind of diary filled with self-commentaries to his dreams ;) .
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I think there are quite a few folks that have, actually. I sure do. ;)
Carl Jung is another good example.
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Ah, ok :) . Yes, it is quite international habit. I doubt whether he keeps diary of it, but Dalai Lama made several remarks on observing and analyzing his own dreams.
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And then what happens...
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hehe... That's left to the fate of the circumstances.
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I’m just uncontrollably the devil’s advocate... and thus it felt open ended. And not finite. And hopeful.
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And it could be those things. ;)
I love the role of the devil's advocate, it's needed and helps present balance.
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Hauntingly Beautiful... <3
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<3 Thank you, dear.
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