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💧Whispers💧
that girl I see everyday,
and I see pictures blurring her eyes
like tears long wiped away.
hidden within her heart.
Like true tears, they're slowly,
tearing her apart.
to take away her pain,
but the air remains silent,
her demons remain unslain.
whispering in her mind,
all the truths she's never denied,
whispering words unkind.
feeding on her soul,
eating away all the joy,
that once made her feel whole.
this time in her eyes.
The demons yelling in her head,
what she once believed as lies.
in the mirror at this girl I see,
and as I try to wipe the tears away,
I remember that girl is me.
Awesome ... I was like poetry ... ok I will take a look ... I was very impressed !
Wish I could slay those Dragons or something I could do ... made me sad to find ... that it was you ...
/hugs JTS (Now following)
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Thanks Allot :)
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Oh Wow!Very nice writing...:)
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Great post
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I relate.....
glad to see you steeming on!
b.a.
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Nice write..💙
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Wow Maria, what a truly great poem.
Love this part.
Great work.
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Thank you :)
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I have to say that I am not much good at poetry - either writing it or reading it - but I enjoyed this and read it twice, thanks for posting!!
Cheers
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Just writing what comes in my mind :)
Thanks for reading!
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Great post thank you for the insight. I'm looking forward to this event great!!!
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Glad to find more poets here. This is such a red and yellow poem. Perfect for the autumn. These whispers read yellow to me, and her demons red. All blurred to the grey of the season with her tears.
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My pleasure :)
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Gasp, @marialin. Speechless.
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Glad you like it :)
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OMG!! I love it.. The "feels" are all embedded in every word. T_T Heartbreaking, yes.. but it's really great! ^^
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This one is soulful and awesome, I like your alliterations they make the poem tenacious, you are an awesome poet
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