Fallen Ladies (Trying my hand at writing senryu) - A poem for #HaikuSaturday by @prydefoltz

in poetry •  7 years ago  (edited)

Hi, haiku lovers!

Today is my second date with Mr. senryu. We're meeting at #HaikuSaturday, a nice iniciative by @prydefoltz.

Here's the piece. I hope you like it :)

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Fallen Ladies

                                         Rain looks like ladies.

                                         Raindrops catch on manly trees.

                                                       But soon their grip’s lost.

Thanks for reading.

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