RE: Dreams

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Dreams

in poetry •  7 years ago  (edited)

She began to lose her memories. Memories that she had written and cherished in her diary.

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I love deep poetry. Most people go shallow or speak about what already exists, not what needs to be said or problems. You have great potential. Keep up the great text, work on your rhyming. Your grammar is shaggy, along with your perception, so try to work on getting the reader to understand your meaning correctly and more throughly.

Overall, I love this poem and how deep it is, so keep doing the deep stuff.