"A Brook"...original poetry by mepatriot

in poetry •  7 years ago 

A Brook

A brook flows through the land I share.
I've spent my eighty years with it there.
I know its every whim and mood.
It's brought me peace, wonder...even food.

In spring it has been a wild thing
roaring and swelling, often jumping.
Threatening independence to its banks,
yet always returning, with my thanks.

In summer it is kind and ever gentle,
sliding and slipping and sentimental,
Bringing sweet life to all of my crops.
When dry, it runs low, but never stops.

As the winter snows begin to fly
Something quite odd will catch my eye,
Eddies grow tired and pools pacific stand,
White edges encroach-- invaders from the land.

For months it is there, still, but changed,
In its winter blankets it seems rearranged.
Now we, it's visitors, do the slipping and sliding,
As the secrets beneath are kept still and hiding.

The hills above from whence it flows,
Likewise grow still in the winter's throes,
Sentinels guarding their wayward daughter,
With their frozen freshets of soon-emerged water.

When snows start to soften and the days to lengthen
I crouch best I can to greet my old friend.
They will bury me soon 'long the banks of this brook,
And my grandsons will come, on occasion, and look.

I hope they will cherish this land and these hills,
Creating their own memories of nature's soft thrills,
And race these banks as once did I,
A lifetime ago, so very nearby.

(at Amity 12.21.16)

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  ·  7 years ago (edited)

This is beautiful. An deep. It captures the whole essence of spring and nature..my favorite line

Threatening independence to its banks,
yet always returning, with my thanks.

Meanwhile, i recommend, unless they are yours, you credit your images


This Post, @mepatriot, has now been chosen and will be featured in the 11th Edition of Xposed. Hopefully it will bring you some much needed exposure and rewards which your post deserves.
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Thanks. I appreciate your kind commentary and the resteeming!

Images are from pixabay.com and do not need to be attributed or credited.

Oh, the images. That is okay. Otherwise the pleasure is mine to feature your post. It is some really powerful poem.

Btw the Xposed Edition 11 is now out. And you are featured.

https://steemit.com/curation/@mirrors/xposed-edition-11

Thanks!

Brother! I see your effort in each post and you really do not have the support you deserve. Here in Venezuela we are creating a healing project for minnows and I want to invite you to belong to that initiative. Although we may not be of the same language, we can establish that connection. We leave you a small vote of the trail and the discord link.

The project is managed by my blood brother @josecarrasquero and @apoyolatino, this is just beginning.



Join to grow together!
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Thanks, Jesus. But for some reason I have had nothing but trouble with discord. It always wants me to authenticate myself, even though I already have, and won't let me in. I will try again another way some time. Thank you for thinking of me.

What a beautiful piece
It can calm the pissed
Full of nature's peace

Thanks so much for your comments! I really appreciate it brother. I'd steem you, but I'm broke!