Just when I thought I was about to take a dark turn I stumbled upon something much more playful that plays on the same emotions in @uniwhisp's latest poem.
You can read her latest entry here: Sing On
Heaven
The Heavenly Lights
The Heavenly Nights
Your Heavenly appeal
This man cannot fight
Heavens abound
Heavens around
Your voice is
Such a heavenly sound
Heavens high
Heaven shines
Heaven is what I’ll feel
If you were mine
Your Heavenly gaze
Keeps me amazed
At the wonder that is you
Now if I could only build the courage
To come talk to you
What's a poem-off, you ask? A challenge between @uniwhisp and I to see if we can go turn-for-turn and repost some of our long lost poems from the vaults of time. No rules apply, and new stuff might just make the mix!
Regards,
Mitchell J
Well written poetry You should write more
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Love the poem; Hopes from afar, sometimes you just need to take a step to get what you want.
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Yes, that was the emotion it was written off of many moons ago.
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Ya know, I'm not a huge fan of poetry, but this is simple and exquisite. Well done!
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Thanks! Glad it could give you a quick poetry interlude :-)
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I have the perfect reply. Posting in 5...4....3...
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Ohh 😲 has he met his match, let’s find out!
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