NO ACEPTA COMO VÁLIDAS, PALABRAS SIN ESENCIA. POEMA

in poetry •  7 years ago  (edited)


Late el corazón acelerado.

En lejana sinfonía monocorde,

la voz del eco responde,

con sinuoso grabado.


Dibuja un registro riguroso.

No contaba con la arrítmica,

y tan solemne mímica,

del corazón presuroso.


Vive presuroso y engarzado.

Por corrientes subcutáneas,

violentas e intantáneas,

se encuentra arrastrado.


Es un sentimiento encapsulado.

Un capullo que erosiona,

un capullo que implosiona

lo que siempre ha callado.


Habla, ya no silencia.

No labra en las aguas cálidas,

no acepta como válidas,

palabras sin  esencia.

Fuente



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      ·  7 years ago 

    Saludos tu amigo @lanzjoseg desde el #TopFive

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        ·  7 years ago 

      Gracias amigo, por tu presencia y valoración.
      Felicitaciones por el hermoso trabajo que haces.

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          ·  7 years ago 

        ¡Me encantó! Un corazón sabio.

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            ·  7 years ago 

          Gracias @israleve . Vengo de visitarte , estoy maravillada con tu última publicación. Mi tiempo no me permitió leer las otras, pero seguiré visitándte

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              ·  7 years ago (edited)

            No acepta como válidas palabras sin esencia. Perfecto final.

            #Synergium.

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                ·  7 years ago 

              https://steemit.com/mydailypost/@aron117/mydailypost-jueves-thursday-naturelive muy lindo poema sigo aprendiendo de usted sin importar los años espero que le guste mi foto le invitó a pasar por mi blog

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                  ·  7 years ago 

                Un saludo te sigo desde #steemfamilyhi

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                    ·  7 years ago 

                  Gracias. Bienvenida a mi blog y encantada por el seguimiento.

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                      ·  7 years ago 

                    Bellísimo poema mi querida amiga María Luisa!! Gracias por acordarte de mí. Un fuerte abrazo desde Chile!!!!

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                        ·  7 years ago 

                      Muchas gracias por tu presencia y valoración.
                      Igualmente un abrazo, querido amigo.

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                          ·  7 years ago 

                        @mllg este poema conquisto mi corazón

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                            ·  7 years ago 

                          Qué linda amiga. Muchas gracias

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                              ·  7 years ago 

                            Buen trabajo : )

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                                ·  7 years ago 

                              Hola @gabrielagomz , muchas gracias por tu valoración y por tu visita.

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                                  ·  7 years ago 

                                Lindo poema amiga.
                                Eres del top 5 de steemfamilyhi Exitos

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                                    ·  7 years ago 

                                  Wow! Excelente, gracias. Espero repetir.

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                                      ·  7 years ago 

                                    Hermoso poema Maria, paso desde synergium. Un abrazo enorme!

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                                        ·  7 years ago 

                                      Gracias @veronicavfr . Que bien que sea de tu gusto. Qué bien que haya nacido oficialmente @synergium

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                                          ·  7 years ago 

                                        Palabras sabias, mi apoyo de #steemfamilyhi Top 5

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                                            ·  7 years ago 

                                          Muchas gracias @yurilaya . Amo a steemfamilyhi.

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                                              ·  7 years ago 

                                            Bonitas palabras. Mi apoyo desde #steemfamilyhi

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                                                ·  7 years ago 

                                              Muchas gracias @blanca56 . Bienvenida a mi blog. Qué bien te haya gustado.

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                                                  ·  7 years ago 

                                                Hermoso el poema. Mi apoyo al top5 #steemfamilyhi

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                                                    ·  7 years ago 

                                                  Muchas gracias por tu apoyo @isgledysduarte . Bienvenida a mi blog.

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                                                      ·  7 years ago 

                                                    Que buen poema! Saludos desde #Steemfamilyhi

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                                                        ·  7 years ago 

                                                      Gracias por la valoración. Bienvenid@ a mi blog.

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                                                          ·  7 years ago 

                                                        This post has received a 8.89% upvote from @lovejuice thanks to @mllg. They love you, so does Aggroed. Please be sure to vote for Witnesses at https://steemit.com/~witnesses.

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                                                            ·  7 years ago 

                                                          Thanks!

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                                                              ·  7 years ago 

                                                            Ohh ohhh, mi querida @mllg, has plasmado los versos de un corazón en franca rebelión.
                                                            Muy ilustrativo.
                                                            Felicidades.

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                                                                ·  7 years ago 

                                                              muy bello, buena lectura a esta hora de la tarde saludos desde #steemfamilyhi

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                                                                  ·  7 years ago 

                                                                Hola Maria, ¿como estas?... Tienes mi apoyo desde #steemfamilyhi... También soy Venezolana específicamente del Zulia, Te invito a visitar mi blog, apoyandonos los Venezolanos y con la ayuda de @steemfamilyhi saldremos adelante como el país que tuvimos antes de esta calamidad de gobierno.. Saludos...

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                                                                    ·  7 years ago 

                                                                  Hola. Bienvenida a mi blog. Steemit puede ser una ventana de oxígeno y de ingresos extras. Muchísimas gracias por tu visita. @steemfamilyhi es un significativo apoyo y a la vez hay que apoyarlos. Estoy también en otro y naciente equipo @synergium, que surgió de un grupo de caraqueños que nos conocemos en el día a día, recién salió a la luz pública, jejejej. Si gustas, puedes visitarlo, es otra opción para ir creciendo en equipo.

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                                                                      ·  7 years ago 

                                                                    Hola! que lindo poema. Bendiciones

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                                                                        ·  7 years ago 

                                                                      Mis saludos desde #steemfamilyhi

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                                                                          ·  7 years ago 

                                                                        Gracias @rosaimm , por tu apoyo. Bienvenida a mi blog y a steemit.
                                                                        Qué crezcas rápidamente

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