RE: Escaping Fate

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Escaping Fate

in poetry •  7 years ago 

Her synthetic smile shows no truth,
Her pathetic eyes show no youth

I found these lines to be particularly haunting. You have done a great job of expressing the hopelessness of depression. Thanks for sharing.

Would you be so kind as to allow me to write a poem in response to this?

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Of course you can! Just link me the response as i'd love to see it! Thank you for your words.