RE: Poverty is Destiny and It Just Can't Change

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Poverty is Destiny and It Just Can't Change

in poetry •  7 years ago 

I enjoyed the crisp and unfaltering language of this piece. The snapping final line was a great way to end it. Nice write.

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Thanks! I appreciate the pithy review. Something along the lines of “snapping” is what I was aiming for so I’m very much warmed by your kind words.