RE: Notepad - useless thoughts of a worthless primate #3

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Notepad - useless thoughts of a worthless primate #3

in poetry •  7 years ago 

I like the subtle ending for this poem. I was a bit taken back it happily surprised. Good work.

By the way, it looks like you may need some editing for better English. I'd be happy to do it for you if you would like.

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      ·  7 years ago 

    I'm glad you liked
    I really need help with the english, and i'll love if you help me.

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      ·  7 years ago (edited)

    The notepad surronds surrounds me, stares staring at me with you its white face, waiting for the words.

    I'm I stop for a moment, and back again, listening the sound of carnival, all people Everybody surrounds me and pushes.

    At this point i'm sure i I hate humans, i'd rather be a monkey.

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        ·  7 years ago 

      I tried not to alter your words too much. And it's really no problem.

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          ·  7 years ago 

        Obrigado pela sua ajuda!

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            ·  7 years ago 

          De nada. Portugues?

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              ·  7 years ago 

            Brasileiro

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                ·  7 years ago 

              I thought so. I have no clue about Portugese, but I speak a little bit of Spanish.

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