RE: Untuk Masa yang Tersisa

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Untuk Masa yang Tersisa

in poetry •  7 years ago 

Sajak yang sejuk.
Romansa yang tak ketinggalan sampai nanti

Andai lebih hemat lagi menggunakan bahasa, lewat suntingan ulang barangkali puisi ini akan lebih kuat.

Tetap.
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