Breathe
A shadow will rise up from a maddening world
A buried, long hidden, and tumultuous world
But it's the shadow last buried so many moons ago
And the moon is the keeper; the moon holds the soul
Though hands are still bound; in memories still
Breathe out the memory
Breathe out the thought
Of every last reason; where reasons are bound
The child whispers slowly
He has no need for repeats
Speak once and I'll listen
To the souls longing core
Why am I hidden, what has me hidden away?
The shadow laughs slowly
But it thinks not, and knows not
And withers away
I packaged it up
It was meant to stay gone
But I opened the package myself all along
Dug up the grave
Cleaned up the stain
Wiped down the surface
Made peace with the pain
The darkness still has a withering stare
Perhaps I just forgot
Forgot to play dead
But it bothers me not
I'm learning to breathe in clean air
Images sourced from unsplash.com.
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Links to earlier works
- Fiction
My Fiction Writing Collection
Writing Myself Out of Existence
When the Levee Breaks
Reality Fading
Lessons Learned From a Dying Man - includes audio version.
Book Reviews
A Glitch In The World - Alex Drozd
All The Light We Cannot See - Anthony Doerr
Where Epics Fail - Yahia Lababidi
Hellbent - Gregg Hurwitz
1Q84 - Haruki Murakami
Soon - Lois Murphy
The Girl Who Played With Fire - Stieg Larsson
American Gods - Neil Gaiman
Do Androids Dream of Electric Sheep - Philip K. Dick
The Girl With The Dragon Tattoo - Stieg Larsson
Altered Carbon - Richard Morgan
Fight Club - Chuck Palahniuk
Crooked God Machine - Autumn Christian
Audio Poetry
The Dance of Destiny and Fate
One Day, Just Not Today
You bring all the feels here, mate. Every line feels like a brush stroke in the vivid imagery you have painted. I feel this is one of those better served with your soothing narration. I hope you come around to dSounding off once again!
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Thanks for the encouraging words guiding me back to recording these. I should get into a routine, but it is more mentally draining than just writing and posting. Mind you that used to be as well, so all in good time. I need to record a new one and test out the volume issue, then I'll see how I go. And thanks for the generous feedback on the poem itself.
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Gah. Your writing is just so lovely. <3
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Thank you kindly :)
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This is so rich with imagery, @naquoya. What beautiful work!
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Thank you, I truly appreciate you sharing your thoughts and feedback. Glad it caught your eye.
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Beautiful, and so gently optimistic.
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It's good to know that is how it has been perceived, thank you.
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Wao, what a poem.. I love it
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Thank you, much appreciated :)
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@naquoya this poem is healing not only for you but for me and I guess for others. I also have a few packages to take out from the grave. I thought they were dead but they come back. Reconciliation is necessary for me to continue.
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Thank you for sharing this. I'm glad the poem communicated to you in this way. I know it flowed quite freely as I began to write it, and those are usually my best ones. They tend to write themselves.
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NICE! I like it a lot. I love when dark imagery is interwoven with strands of life like this. I come bearing news, here is an invite to the dolphinschool discord server would love to have you https://discord.gg/RrUyccN
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Awesome, very happy to read that you liked it. And thanks for the invite, will have a look soon.
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oooo thats good! teach meeeee LOL
i like the lesson learned and breathing clean air ... nice ... xx Eagle
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Thank you, I'll see what I can do - perhaps in part two :)
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Oh great! :)
Look forward to that, I think when I wrote this o meant on how to write poetry like this :)
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I wish I knew how to write poetry like this, sometimes these ones just happen :)
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you are so pulling my leg! cut it out ... i don't want to walk lopsided ... :p
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That's a soul toucher.We cannot really bury shadows, can we? We must clean them up and work through the pain for them to disappear. Very nicely done.
@Lahvista
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I suppose if we bury them, or try to, they come back from the dead eventually. To remind us that we have work to do. I suppose. Thanks for your comment :)
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Most excellent words to inspire the world
be well
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Thank you, so glad you liked it.
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