In anticipation of the coming Easter
just around the corner now....................
(1)
I thought I would dredge up one of my old poems.
I hope that you like it.........
(2)
Purple Flower
Eyes wide open to the thorn
This the year, this the day, this the hour
To which my punctured heart is born.
ouzo and out,
@onceuponatime
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Image credits:
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(2) https://pixabay.com
(3) @twiceuponatime
καλημερα...εγω θα εδινα αλλο νοημα παντως... παντως οι στοιχοι πιστευω οτι ειναι πολυδιαστατη...παλια εγραφα και οι συγκεκρημενοι μου αρεσουν παρα πολυ!!!
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Congratulations @onceuponatime!
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I wonder if I am just thinking this or is it true?
Are you talking about the third eye chakra here ?
Because it is violet in color, the crown chakra is purple and when they open, they open like a flowers !!
the second line of eyes wide open indicates it more that it symbolises the chakras.
and then there is heart chakra as well,
also when the chakras of a person blossoms, he takes a new birth.
I ain't sure if this is what you mean by your poem, but if it's true, then hats off to you :D
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The meaning of poetry is in the (third) eye of the beholder.
You have a beautiful third eye!
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Ahh !! That's a beautiful reply !!
Applaud !!
Thank you so much :)
I am a deep thinker. Haha
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Beware of drowning.
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Hahaha !!
Wise reply !
I sometimes think so much about things that my friends tell me to take a chill, relax and not think so much !!
It is indeed true that anything if exceeds the limits becomes harmful !!
I will be careful and try to remember your suggestion. Thank you ;)
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Awesome - This goes well with the Reading of Psalm 22 today.
https://steemit.com/jesus/@offgridlife/if-jesus-is-god-then-why-does-he-cry-out-in-aramaic-my-god-my-god-why-have-you-forsaken-me
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I am in Greece, where Good Friday is still a week away.
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You can read this next Friday then
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As a painter, I often struggle with the interpretation of written art. I'm sure, my approach of trying to put the words together like pieces of a puzzle is rather simplistic...
So, I'm lead to believe, its about Easter (call me Einstein). Purple, the mix of the divine blue and the red for man points towards god in human appearance, Jesus Christ. He is wearing the crown of thorns (as in the picture above).. Eyes wide open to the thorn, he knowingly and consciously went down this path (to end his human existence)... then the date of course.
Not sure I understand the "punctured heart". Reborn is clear, but the punctured heart must point to something else, as from all I know, wasn't it Jesus's liver they punctured?
Therefore I think it must be something personal you connect with the day and event then... 🤔
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See what you get from the visuals in this music video:
Dead Can Dance Summoning Of The Muse
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Definitely a very strong visual language, which makes me wonder, if it is really the video to the music, or the other way round. The beginning reminded me of an event I saw in Toledo a few years ago and in a way it all made me think of the art of Dino Valls...
Already watched that on the other comment and wondered, if there is a direct relationship to your poem. Together it gives me a... hard to describe feeling of:
Captivated by the mystery of faith... but also aware of the problems of institutionalized religion... finally finding true spirituality or love (of god and/or his creation)...
Something like that. English isn't my native language, so its quite difficult to explain what I mean in this context... hope it makes sense
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Peter Gabriel's music for The Last Temptation of Christ is stunning!!!!
Have you seen the movie as well? It is based on the Greek novel.
Like you perhaps, I don't do organized religion very well. Dogma isn't my strong suit :-)
But I try to get along :-)
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You are right with the organized religion. I don't go to church, but I believe in a creative force.. won't even call it energy, as that is misused too much in my humble opinion.
Love Peter Gabriel. That piece is awesome. I haven't seen the movie, nor read the novel. But I know the El Greco painting on the cover ;-)
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The movie is seminal IMHO. The novel, which I am learning Greek so that I can read it some day in the original, was the cause of the author being excommunicated from the organized Church.
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I'm getting the impression that you're talking about the pineal gland here! Especially taking into consideration this beautiful view of yours!
Have a great time!
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If I'm not, I should have been, right? :-)
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@onceuponatime It's more than obvious now! I'm more than happy to know we share the same beliefs!! Regarding spirituality at least!
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I believe that Love will find a way. And in stumbling towards ecstasy.
Happy Easter.
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That was a small yet so inspiring post! Even those last lines.
Happy Easter to you too, sir!
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Easter is just around the corner and this post around the word "pierced" remind me also about the traditional chocolate Easter eggs (with a surprise inside). When I was a child I couldn't open them before Easter, but my dad pierced a bit the eggs so I could see what there was inside ^_^
Beautiful poem!!!
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Beautiful story!
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Yours one is very beautiful too.
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I really like your purple flower poem. you are genuine writer sir. i want to share my own poetry.
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Thank you for sharing it. You seem to have some deep insights.
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Thank you so much sir.
This one is only for you sir,
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you made my day sir! Now i am very inspired to writing my poetry! because i always writing poetry sir but nobody not interated my poetry.
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To be honest, I was expecting a poem with a twist... just like all your posts.
I am pleasantly surprised. :)
Happy Easter!
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You didn't find it twisted? I am so disappointed :-)
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I take full responsibility and accept my punishment.
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You're not even going to put up a fight?
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Not today!
I like to think the strongest position one can be is in complete surrender. And besides, I am not so good at kung fu fighting, even if it's metaphorical.
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You're right of course!
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Our hearts are wild creatures, perhaps that is why our ribs are cages; I think not. For they are the silly crazy foolish little things that go about slipping and sliding, and more dangerously, falling in the dark.
By-Power Poetry
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Didn't Eve, and by extension women, steal one of the ribs in Adam's, and our, cages? Maybe we can escape through that gap?
"They taught me in School of such spaces."
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I am writing a poem about eagles, I dedicate to you @onceuponatime me
hope you like it.
I also often write poems in my blog, because I like poetry and poetry.
I know my poetry is still a lot of flaws I hope you can judge my poetry.
EAGLE
Your wings stretch out to measure the air
Your voice echoes like a gigantic pluit
Your claws are sharp, ready to pounce on your morning breakfast
Your beak is beautiful, yet threatening
Days give you a game
You play with jokes, but mixed with death
You are a king in the sky
You are the symbol of the might of space
You are a flying rifle
Ready to hit the poor souls
Your nest is the sky
Your house is the sky
Your body is in the sky
Your soul in the sky
Eat you also in the sky
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really deep poetry. I am confused to interpret the meaning you wrote in the poem.
but, I really respect your work. this is really good poetry, I really like the strands of your poetry.
Thank you @onceuponatime for sharing to us
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@pot87 says: "I am confused to interpret the meaning you wrote in the poem."
My suggestion? More, or less, pot for you @pot87. Either should help!
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Aaah! I love collaborative posts! @onceuponatime and @twiceuponatime work together in the name of art! :)
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I have to keep a very close eye on him. I suspect that he is much more intent on stealing the show than "collaborating"!
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Oh well! Kids can be rather untamed, but we all know who is the genius in these posts! ;)
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thank you for taking my side in these family matters :-)
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A round of applause for you, lol...
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Wow!
I used to think that a poem should be a bit long before passing a message to the reader or listener.
But this surely has proved me wrong.
Short, precised and filled with deep messages.
Blending colours (purple) with an event (Easter), I really admire this..
Bravo my friend @onceuponatime
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Thank you!
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Ok, he might be an ass to you from time to time but at least he let's you use his photos!
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That's not enough to make up with having to put up with his snarly presence in my life!
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so, who is the yin and who is the yang?
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Oh! I thought you knew!
We are actually part of a threesome!
Yin, Yang & Yung
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Still, you didn't answer the question!
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Please! I'm trying to be politically correct!
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Wow, how it is made? It seems wood and it remind me a little bit of Pisano's art ^^ Cool
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Sorry, I got it from a stock image off of https://pixabay.com and I don't know the artist.
I so hope that you are not thoroughly disillusioned with me now :-)
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WOW!!!!!!
Has to be one of my favourite posts of yours!!!!
💗 💗 💗
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An old poem and some stock photos? You are too kind!
But I already knew that :-)
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Great lines. I really like your post. Ending with rhyming words makes it more good like thorn and born. This is awesome.
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Thank you.
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No problem. Keep sharing such content
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So your poetry defines well both images. Your poetry touches the heart who will read your in-depth poetry. Liked it...:)
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"Touching hearts. One poem at a time."
Nice, but I could never live up to it :-)
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Beautiful poem. Happy easter.
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Happy Easter to you too!
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Beautiful!
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Who, @twiceuponatime or me? Careful now.
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Hahaha the poem of course, but you guys are also good looking from an aesthic view with homosexual intentions :-D
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Don't judge a book by it's intentions. Judge it by it's cover.
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Awwwnnnn this is beautiful. Yaaaayyyy its Easter period. How did I forget that?
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Your mind was probably on chocolate.
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Hahahahahahaha OMG Thats quite funny 🙈🙈🙈
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It's a fantastic quadruplets with a beautiful rhyme scheme, it reflect a bit of sweetness and mildness, I look at the effect and I felt your use of consonance,
Sir it's fantastic and brilliant I never knew you wrote poems
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I was doing all that? Really? Wow!
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Awesome picture very unique and classic, flowers is pretty with poetry. Easter is coming that's fantastic 💕
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Happy Easter!
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You've got to be one that, wherever you are, like a flower, you've got to blossom where you're planted. You cannot eliminate darkness. You cannot banish it by cursing darkness. The only way to get rid of darkness is light and to be the light yourself.
Your words are really awesome.
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Thank you. Your words are wise.
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My pleasure
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Hi dear @onceuponatime
How are you?...
Dear your art photography is a amazing..
& well post..
I really like your post.
Thanks for sharing this post..
I am new your blog done..
I just @resteem & #upvote
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And you got 5 votes so far, including mine. Way to go!!! Happy Easter.
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Yes..dear @onceuponatim... Thank you
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Sharing your old ones ,it feels nice when a person shares his own work that has grown old .with ay passing you feel like the words grow more meaningful like i m feeling now...
The third picture you love you dad alot..😍
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Old stuff can take on additional meanings with more life experience. That's for sure!
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Old is gold sir,your poem is fantastic.This line is greet:
This the year, this the day, this the hour
To which my punctured heart is born.
Thanks for sharing with us
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May the Easter Bunny bring you chocolate galore!
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wow! this is amazing, very beautiful Purple Flower and the poetry lovely.
Awesome picture last one :)
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Happy Easter!
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I always respect poetry. The poet reveals the diversity of the people @onceuponatime
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That's a nice thought. Happy Easter.
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Poetry actually speaks of human mind. It is good that you write.
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Thank you. Happy Easter!
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You are welcome
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Pierced by my passion for a Purple
Flower
Eyes wide open to the thorn
This the year, this the day, this the hour
To which my punctured heart is born.
Just outstanding #writing
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Thank you.
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Very meaningful poetry. This part i liked this is the hour to which my punctured heart is born.
Your heart is born for this nice thought you are great poet.
Best of luck
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Pain makes man think. Thought makes man wise. Wisdom makes life endurable.
I wish there was a shortcut, but I don't think that there is :-)
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Mistake make experience and experience is the key of success
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In that case, I have quite a large collection of keys LOL
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Collect your mistake and learn in mistake.
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Life can be full of emotions or pain It can sometimes bring you down that you feel weak By years go by, you start to over come those emotions
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And have years ever gone by!!!!
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Not really
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nices posts i like your posts and i am thankful to you and thanks to share a posts and i am supported to you.
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Thank you!
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you are welcome))))
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I am not that good at reading Poetry, it's because my lack of imagination, i like your poem but frankly speaking i didn't get it.If you don't mind, will you explain it to me, if you have time.
Please @onceuponatime
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It might be quicker if you just took some drugs :-)
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R U serious !! :-)
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Not if U R.
Otherwise, yes.
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Okay then.
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Great poetry. Words can puncture a heart beyond repair. I love the artwork.
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Thank you.
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@onceuponatime ... with the help of @twiceuponatime you create an emotional connection with all of the symbolism you have used - both spoken & unspoken.
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Be very careful about praising @twiceuponatime. I don't trust him. He can be very manipulative.
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So you are the influencer & he is the manipulator ...
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Sssshhhhh! I think he's listening!
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Before I read , I see a photo and I feel a suffering.
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Before I was even born I felt that suffering :-)
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Happy easter in advance
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And to you!
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I like poetry.
Outstanding poetry
I apreciate your post @onceuponatime
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Thanks!
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So you are a poet too! :) Also your photo there looks great, you look really happy maybe that lovely landscape did its work there!!
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I think happiness is a choice, not a place :-)
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Oh yes absolutely, I just thought that this place inspired you or something!
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Awesome post.
I like that @onceuponatime
Upvote your post
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Thank you.
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this flower has other colours also
people ignore these colours like my crush ignores me
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i guess you are feeling crushed by your crush. Well, happy Easter anyway :-)
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So pleasant and Heart touching poetry you have written, Really a nice bunch of words...
Thumbs up for you mate....
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Thanks.
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wow you are a poet too that's epic multi talented person :D
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Kind of you to think so!
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When the heart is pierced, it is not scary looking, not scary piercing eyes. Beautiful verse. I, too, sometimes am fond creation of verses. And you're right that everyone finds meaning in them. For me, your poem is revealed in the sense of accepting the inevitable bitter truth. How Jesus took death for us. Nor should we be afraid to open our hearts and eyes to the pain of others. We should not be indifferent. You need to be able to accept someone else's pain and suffering, as their own. And fight against evil together.
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Yes!
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Excellent poetry bro, thakns for sharing with us.
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Thank you.
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Most impressive poetry lines indeed fascinating poem with nice designing art an Jesus statue image.
Deeper meaningful indeed there. Nice stuff @onceuponatime.
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thank you.
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very beautiful poem!
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Easter special for you.
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good poetry and very inspiring.
I like your art.
you are a poet and you are also a great artist.
very good @onceuponatime
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It must be the Beauty inside of you that sees it everywhere :-)
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yes sir you are right.
I look closely
I found the perfection of your post.
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Loved it.Includes a lot of passion in it.
May your Easter basket be full
of Joy, Happiness,SBD and peace
Today and Always ! :D
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I am on a first name basis with the Easter Bunny :-)
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Is this your Easter Bunny ??
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Looks more like my New Year's bunny :-)
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Hahaha then every year must be Your Year!
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Only years ending in either odd or even numbers :-)
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These lines are really worth... Beautifully presented beautifully written.. Anyways even though only 4 lines yet it would had taken so much time to write for sure..
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It didn't take long to write. But it took a long time to try and pack some meaning into them :-)
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This is what i meant... The words written together is whst takes time. Its not everybody's cup of coffee and one needs really to work hard to bring the group of words into life... I would say its an art and moreover God's gift.
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So you're a poet also. Is there something you can't do
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Well, just for starters, I can't make 2 + 2 = 5
And I am hopeless at making 4 + 3 = 8
But I can, occasionally, make 1 = 1 = 11
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Show me how you do that :p
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My heart knows no limitations of tender rejoice
Pour my soul with humble submission of love
I would treasure all my love for you
Make me believe that you want it too
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Oooooooo!
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I tagged you in one of my posts, for the curiosity of your name :(
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The heart is an amazing pump
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Could it do anything for my crypto portfolio? What do you think.
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It should be stable and not depend on changes in the portfolio. This will be his best help to you. If you are about this.
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I don't understand it 😥
Am I stupid
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When you ask yourself that question, what answer do you get?
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I did and I'm a genius apparently
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Somehow I just knew it!!!!
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Haha..
And now I know it too..
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I think I see what you did there.
Nice metaphor.
The more I read it, the more I like it.
I write some poetry too, translating poetry is hard tho.
Anyway, very nice poem.
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Anyone who can translate a poem is achieving the Impossible.
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It is kind of impossible.
Anyway, can you wash my doubts away?
You are talking about christ right?
Besides the experience with the purple flower.
I can see it in there, even the purple is a christian color.
Just a doubt, that was my interpretation.
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Poetry evaporates if you try to explain it rationally.
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That is true. Is just that I like when other people talk to me about what they understood about my writing. It gives me other perspectives and as a bonus, I can learn something of it.
Also, you know if they were paying attention or at least trying.
(Like that lady talking about the third eye)
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beautiful photo photos- good luck
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You are so methodical!
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I read and see your parents are not primary in posting something. I will likewise comment on the topic you created.
Thank sir.
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:-)
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great post......//////
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You are a gentleman!
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Very near to coming Easter. Your poem so lovely and expand mind soul.
Totally nice to see meaningful thoughts here.
Superior one @onceuponatime.
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May the Easter Bunny lay many many chocolate eggs in your basket!
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Poetry is that deep type of writing that convey the message with laser light focus with deep emotions. I did not know that you are a poet too after comprehending the wonderful theme of this poem i am convinced that you are an awesome poet <3
I would love to read your more poetry @onceuponatime :)
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Happy Easter!
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Considering the time of Eastern the poem fits to it very well and also if it is your own words that is really good. it is difficult to create a poem, I believe you should have an inspiration or real moving event, but also the talent for rhyme. @onceuponeatime I know in Greece people celebrate Orthodox Eastern which is later, which one you celebrate, if you do?
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I live in Loutraki. But I will celebrate with you!
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Beautiful words, of course i like it...
These days are to remind us to love the other people like Him!!
have a great day...
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And a very happy Easter to you (once we make it past Good Friday).
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and a very very very Happy Easter for you!!! :)))
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Prince and his "Purple Rain" approves of the photos and poem of this post!!!
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He was super cool. But he died of drug use, and way too young.
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Unfortunately!!!! Literally every male 80's Pop-Giant is dead now (all in their early 50's too). George Michael, Michael Jackson and Prince. THE KING died in an even younger age...Only 42! In a perfect world even THE King should be alive now (83). I hope all of them (plus many more) are in a better place now. Especially the tortured soul of Jim Morrison. What a GREAT poet and artist with a totally messed up mind/soul!
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I don't know why I am alive. But, somehow, I survived all that.
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Just because they were more famous, doesn't mean that they were wiser or had a stronger organism than you. Plus, I am 100% certain they didn't have a funky belt with a batman buckle 😂 (even though the late overweight version of Elvis had some way too crazy belts and shoes)
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Ah ha! You caught my uncanny resemblance to a fat, gaudy, overweight version of Elvis!
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Never!!! 😋
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very nice post sir... :)
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You are too kind.
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I like the Purple Flower... wow it's amazing 💜
Upvote done 😊
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It said that it like you too!
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@onceupoanatime, Image credited @twiceuponatime. That's pretty interesting.
In anticipation of the coming Easter you provided amazing purple poem. It's stunning much. Toughed my hear deeply.
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"Toughed my hear deeply."
Some things end up making my heart tough too! Usually not my poetry though :-)
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Oh no....Correct word is touched...
So sorry for inconvenience.
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Don't be sorry! I loved your Freudian slip!
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This is the year, this is the day, this is the hour
To which my punctured heart is born
(Culled from you)
Heaviness filled the heart amidst thorn
Every mouth refused the ear of corn
King of the Jew they mockingly adorn
His garment stripped and terribly torn
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Ah ha! You feel Easter coming too!
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Yes, i feel it, i sense it, and see it knocking. Haha
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Lmaaaaaaaooooooooo!. Knocking on heaven's door. Hahahaha
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Well thats great words to describe
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I see what you mean, or, I mean what you see. We'll let the jury decide.
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I really like the connection between the poem and the picture! @twiceuponatime he can definitely pose. where is this picture taken? China?
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Hey! How come @twiceuponatime gets the credit? What about all the work I do?
The picture is at the Summer Palace in Beijing.
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I always acknowledge your work🏆!
Summer Palace in Beijing seems a peaceful place, added to my bucket list for sure!
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You look like a Greek god. He's fabulous and he knows it...
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I bet you say that to all the Greek gods :-)
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Only to the most sexy Greek gods, I swear! I give a word of the king of potatoes!
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heart touching poem, love your poem. a poem makes a man more better.
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Like good
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Wow great and amazing poetry.
I love your post. 😍😍😍
I love the way in which you express your feelings in the form of poem.
I appreciate your work.
Thanks @onceuponatime for sharing this post.
Upvoted + resteemed your post.
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Wow. Thank you.
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Your most welcome sir.🤗
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I like purple and also like Poetry, that was a good one :d
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I'm pretty sure that they like you too. I think that you should approach them.
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Well... if you insist! I should try at least :d
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Awesome! This is what makes me happy to be on this platform, so many talented people who are changing the world for better. Some do it with their writing, some by art. I have also tried writing a poetry today. Do check out my post too:
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Thank you. I will
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sir, the poem is little but very nice sir.
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@onceuponatime sir so sweet poetry you write sir. i loved it.
My favourite flower is purple flower sir.
I also like to writing my heart word.
Find out the whole city,
if you meet,
I see you
when you open your eyes , you can not see it.
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Sweet.
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@onceuponatime sir, this is my poem,
Flower is not good girl.
Flowering flowers are to give, -
The flowers have to be sacrificed.
Those flowers,
Those flowers go through,
They go wrong,
They take away the pulse.
You flowers, girl Break in the air
Strike the team with the wind
The flowers are not loaded in the mountains
Anchor wind tilted over and over again.
In the case of flowers,
Lot of fungal wounds in the lotus wounds
That flower, you're out of the wire,
Flowers are never flowered.
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sir i think you don't like my poem, sorry sir.
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I think that it belongs on your own post, not in a comment to mine.
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Lovely poetry, you are so talented. Also, very beautiful purple flower. Happy Easter. :D
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Happy Easter
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You are really getting ready for Easter, i can see that sir. Any plans for tomorrow. Let me be the first to wish you Happy Easter. wide grin
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Happy Easter to you!
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The most beautiful thing we can experience is mystery. It is the source of all real art and science. I see your work with my third eye, it's amazing @onceuponatime
great poetry .. Life is a drawing art without eraser.
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It's a mystery to me too!
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this is a question for me, why is it a mystery to you onceuponatime ??
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See my previous post:
https://steemit.com/photos/@onceuponatime/studies-in-blue-and-red
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is not it a Buddhist sanctuary? full of mystique but for Buddhists is the most sacred place and it is very valuable in my opinion .. is it a mystery room for you?
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The whole world is a mystery to me!
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The gentle words we say to our mates are stored in a secret place in heaven. One day, they will fall like rain, then spread, and the mystery of our love will grow in the corners of the world. because the world is full of puzzles with unsolved mysteries?
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you are a perfect person, great and have a high artistic spirit, the perfect man for women who get you as a husband. good luck and healthy continue. i am happy to be friends with great people @oceuponatime
art can only be read and seen with the inner heart and I read your great work of art today with my inner self
Thanks for this @onceuponatime
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The answer always lies within!
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that's really true :) only the artistic person who can see it, I really appreciate art because art for me is a difficult life in carving
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good post. I really like the artwork. in your post, I get a lot of inspiration through your work.
let art through steemit together and let us achieve success in steemit with art
Thank you @onceupontime for sharing in steemit
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Seems you didn't like my post enough to upvote it though :-)
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No Sir, my network signal is bad.
I did upvote and resteem your post. Because your poem is different. Good poetry
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Honestly i say you
Its really good writing.
You are such brilliant thinking.
I salute you @onceuponatime
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First time i see your picture! feeling better now like your poem. you looking still dashing. How old are you?
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Unfortunately I am way too old for you.
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you always young. keep rocking always
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It's really interesting topic to read............////////
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Nice Poem , I love purple color
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@agnikana, read this one.
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Wow ... Lovely
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wooww, very good. your post is really interesting to follow. you are a great artist.
I can feel a lot of inspiration for me, after I visited and read your post.
I really like this post, I am looking forward to your next posting.
Thank you @onceuponatime for sharing
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If you liked my post, and are looking forward to my next one, why didn't you upvote it?
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I did upvote your post, i am sorry because i am missing that.
And i resteem your post, because i love poetry. Every day i write one poetry .
Your poetry give me many inspiration
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Its your old poem but this one new for me. its too good poem. your poem made purple color more attractive! great one.
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@onceuponatime sir, If your old poem is very nice then your new poem how may be more gorgeous. great sir. I am new member in this steemit, So please always keep me in your touch.
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@onceuponatime I don't know when I see Purple Color, I remember my past. I badly missing her. I just loved her. Makes me sad about thinking of her.
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Great show, I like it!...
poetry is my favourit subject............///////
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Beautiful verse, @onceuponatime .
" Pierced by my passion for a Purple Flower
Eyes wide open to the thorn" -
Sounds like True Love to me :) ! Nothing but True. Nothing but Love . :)
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I feel dumb to admit it, but I had to read the comments to understand the poetry! :/
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Your poem is a reflection of how you appreciate Jesus Christ. You have realized His sacrifices and how He love the people.
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Very touching poem, I really liked it. Good luck to you and love.
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I thought to peek in on you @onceuponatime and I found this. Yes, Easter has passed and in the Steemy world this post has expired, but I read and enjoyed your gorgeous little poem. Although ‘gorgeous’ isn’t really the right word. But it did lead me to reading on the Pasqueflowers, and a nice legendary fact that I’d love to use in my own project. So a belated thanks for this post. :)
Also, I didn’t realize previously that you posted poetry! I’m getting so much value from poets on Steemit. I’ll be peeking in again. Hopefully, I’ll catch the next one on time! I feel I’m always late here and it’s more nextuponatime!
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