I rage.
Tempestuous storm is my soul.
I am fire, crackling, painful, charred.
I am desire, earthy, quaking, destructive.
I rage.
Churning seas are my love.
I am hatred, sparking, crushing, thrashing.
I am loathing, slippery, oozing, sinking.
I rage.
I am lonely, cold, clutching, hollow.
I am spent, wasted, empty, snuffed.
I rage.
I am delicate, damaged, now devoured.
Come be my salvation, won't you please .....
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I love how this piece consists of words defining the rage within yet there is a delicacy at the end...the need to be saved. Looking forward to future posts!
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Thank you so so so much! Your words touched my heart!
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Such emotion in your words. You have a great way with words. Keep them coming.
I also saw a few of your other posts, and it proves to me even more, that the veterans of Steemit care too. Thank you.
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Thank you @davidmendel.
You made me blush! I try my best with the words! I struggle at times because I am not English. So hearing/reading these replies make me so happy!
I care, I care a lot! Everyone on Steemit deserves to be seen and noticed. <3
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Don't let not being native English speaking ever stop you. It's my native language and I can struggle writing in it from time to time. And again thank you for your support. I am a firm believer in paying it forward.
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Beautiful poem snake! I just realized I wasn't following you but I am now :)
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Thank you! I am have pushed follow on you as well! So now we can play that we are a train! LMAO
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This post has received a 2.03 % upvote from @booster thanks to: @poeticsnake.
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Damn that's powerful. Love it!
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Thank you so so much ! :D
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Reminds me of my breakup with my ex. Great poem tho. resteemed,upvoted and followed :)
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Thank you ever so kindly! Means a lot to get replies like this one!
Just wondering, are you from the tasty group that is also on FB? The one who are sharing the most amazing foods?
Followed you as well. Look forward to your posts!
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Uh, haha, I'm from the youtube network :)! But thanks, !, My upvotes are not worth much, but everything counts right :D still new to steemit.
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Every vote is amazing in my eyes! I am not here for the money first place! It's nice but it's not my goal!
In time you will grow bigger I am sure! Welcome to Steemit! The BEST PLACE TO BE!
Good luck on your journey here!
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Nice choice of words. I like it!
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Thank you @ladyrednails! :D
You made me smile!
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Glad to hear :D
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A smile and reply from @ladyrednails a day keeps the psycho Doc Doc doc away!
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I really feel it , it's a sad feeling , I have it too , nice poem , enjoyed reading it , we are all need salvation :) <3
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Thank you so so kindly @davidfar! Your words always make me feel so happy! You are a great soul!
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Lovely poem!
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