In the still of the night! ( Original poem by @poeticsnake)

in poetry •  7 years ago 




Img credits : Bookheart. 


As I lay upon my bed,

Thoughts of you invade my head.

Inside my brain they whirl around,

Images of you turn my life upside down.


You give me emotions so strange to me,

You open my eyes to what might be.

With a gentle touch from your soft hand

You lead me from this cold grey land.


You showed me warmth and love and joy and desire

You freed me from the earth to lift me higher

My emotions run riot, my life is aflame

I know now, things will never be the same.


The way that you smile the curve of your lips

My hand touching you, feeling the warmth of your hips

The words you whisper in the still of the night

I will love you now and forever ... it feels so right.



Img credits: theodysseyonline.


My name is @poeticsnake, a creative writer and dreaming poet! 
A wandering soul searching for new paths to walk on!
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This was a wonderful piece! Very well written!

It's clear you put a lot of passion into it!

Thank you ever so kindly! :D
Writing is my passion and so is poetry. I can spend hours and hours behind my screen pondering about a single word!
Thank you for your kind reply!

I used to write all the time about 20 years ago, loved it!

I know just what you mean about picking the right word.

When I am really deep into a poem, it's the only moment I can seriously calm down and just wait while doing nothing else until I find it!

I hope that these verses are about mutual love)

They come from the heart! Mutual or not <3

Beautiful words, @poeticsnake. Its combination is excellent.
Thanks for sharing us this poem.

Thank you ever so kindly @oneray
You made me smile from ear to ear!

Thanks to you, for your words. In Venezuela we say: Me hiciste reír de oreja a oreja. I did not know how to say in English.

This post has received a 0.63 % upvote from @drotto thanks to: @banjo.

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Your publications are really wonderful
I am following you
i love you